记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific examples or reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember information I studied three days ago, which helps me a lot in my studies.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear example of something important you forgot, using simple and correct sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, during an assessment, I forgot that I had already read a passage, which made me confused and affected my performance.

建议: Try to organise your answer with clear examples and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about what you need to remember.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as how much money I have spent and the tasks I still need to complete. This helps me manage my time and budget effectively.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer sentences and linking words. Explain your method step by step to make it more effective.

示例: To remember important things, I usually make a checklist. Then, I focus on completing each task on the list one by one to ensure nothing is forgotten.

× I think I'm good at memorizing things because I can easily remember something that like 3 before and.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing things because I can easily remember something from about 3 days ago.

The phrase 'something that like 3 before and' is unclear and incorrectly structured. The verb 'like' is misused here and the time reference is incomplete. The correction uses 'from about 3 days ago' to clearly indicate the time frame, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× This a good happy for action for me as I go to for the studying is helping a lot.

✓ This is a good habit for me as studying is helping a lot.

The original sentence lacks a verb and contains unclear phrases like 'happy for action' and 'go to for the studying'. The correction adds the verb 'is' and replaces unclear phrases with 'habit' and 'studying' to form a coherent sentence.

× I have focused on something very important for me is was when I was doing ASMR during assessment, I forgot that I have been, I have been.

✓ I focused on something very important to me when I was doing ASMR during an assessment; I forgot that I had already read that passage.

The original sentence has mixed tenses and unclear structure. 'I have focused' and 'is was' are incorrect combinations. The correction uses past tense 'focused' and past perfect 'had already read' to correctly sequence events and clarify meaning.

× I've been already read about that passage and I forgot that western mini.

✓ I had already read that passage, but I forgot some details.

The phrase 'I've been already read' is incorrect; the present perfect continuous is misused. 'Western mini' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction uses past perfect 'had already read' and replaces unclear phrase with 'some details' for clarity.

× I think I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life, such as. How many money I have already spent or how many words did I haven't done and I just need to do it done in this moment?

✓ I think I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life, such as how much money I have already spent or how many tasks I haven't done, and I just need to do them now.

'How many money' is incorrect because 'money' is uncountable; 'how much money' is correct. 'How many words did I haven't done' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'tasks'. The correction fixes quantifier usage and clarifies the sentence.

× For me, I will list out a check To Do List for important things and I would just focus on that list and I will.

✓ For me, I will make a checklist of important things and just focus on that list.

'List out a check To Do List' is awkward and incorrect. The correction uses 'make a checklist' which is the correct collocation. Also, 'for important things' is better expressed as 'of important things' to indicate the content of the list.

× I would do it following that lease.

✓ I would do it following that list.

'Lease' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'list'. The correction replaces 'lease' with 'list' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.