记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating your ability and giving a brief explanation without repeating phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I always pay close attention to where I place my belongings, which helps me remember their locations easily.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence structure clearer. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: If my memory serves me right, when I was in 5th grade, I once forgot my mobile phone, which was very important because it contained my documents, pictures, and other valuable items.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. It seems you intended to mention almonds as a memory aid, but the explanation is confusing. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar.

示例: I need to remember many daily tasks, and I believe eating almonds helps keep my memory strong, as my ancestors used to say.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by combining sentences for better flow and using linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'keep an extra eye on it'.

示例: I mainly make a to-do list for the tasks I have to complete, and I also regularly check it to ensure I don't forget anything important.

× Yes, I am incredible at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I am incredible at memorising things.

The word 'memorizing' is the American English spelling, while 'memorising' is the British English spelling. Since the question uses 'memorising', it is better to keep consistency in spelling style.

× I always keep an eye on things where I kept them, where I keep them.

✓ I always keep an eye on where I keep things.

The sentence mixes past tense 'kept' and present tense 'keep' incorrectly. Since the action is habitual, present tense should be used consistently. Also, the phrase 'on things where I kept them' is awkward; it is better to say 'on where I keep things'.

× If my memory serves me right, when I was in my 5th grade I forgot my mobile phone which was very essential for me as it was having my documents, pictures and many other things.

✓ If my memory serves me right, when I was in 5th grade I forgot my mobile phone which was very essential for me as it had my documents, pictures and many other things.

The phrase 'was having' is incorrect because 'have' in this context is a stative verb and should be in past simple 'had'. Also, 'in my 5th grade' is better as 'in 5th grade'.

× I need an almond to remember things of my daily life because my ancestors is that old wind is very good for keeping memory strong.

✓ I need a mnemonic to remember things in my daily life because my ancestors say that old wisdom is very good for keeping memory strong.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'an almond' is incorrect in this context; likely the student meant 'a mnemonic' or 'a method'. 'Ancestors is that old wind' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my ancestors say that old wisdom'. Also, 'things of my daily life' should be 'things in my daily life'.

× I mainly make A to do list for the things which I have to do. And then I also keep an extra eye on it.

✓ I mainly make a to-do list for the things I have to do, and then I also keep an extra eye on it.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens and lowercase 'a'. The sentence starting with 'And then' is informal and better combined with the previous sentence using a comma and 'and'.