记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并使用恰当的词汇表达自己的观点。

示例: I find it difficult to memorise things like mathematical formulas, but I can easily remember personal experiences and conversations.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，清晰表达自己的做法，并注意连贯性。

示例: I have never forgotten anything important because I always write important emails in my calendar and set reminders one day in advance.

建议: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致难以理解。建议简化句子结构，明确表达日常需要记住的事情，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: I don't have many things to remember daily because I don't have exams. If something important comes up, I write it down in my calendar to remind myself.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用连贯的句子，清楚描述记忆重要事情的方法，并避免无关内容。

示例: I remember important things by writing them down. For instance, if I have a conference, I note the key points on my phone. Also, I record events like ticket bookings in my calendar to keep track.

× It depends if we're talking about men, write some rows or some.

✓ It depends if we're talking about men, writing some rows or something.

这里'some rows'用法不当，应该用动名词形式'writing'来表达正在进行的动作。'some'后面缺少具体名词，改为'something'更合适。

× I don't think that I have too much things to remember in my daily life 'cause my measure do not have the exam, so I do not always remember the knowledge points and if I have barely important cat important even than my calendar will reminds me so.

✓ I don't think that I have too many things to remember in my daily life because my major does not have exams, so I do not always remember the knowledge points, and if I have barely important or even more important things, my calendar will remind me.

'too much things'应改为'too many things'，因为'things'是可数名词。'measure'应为'major'。'do not have the exam'应为'does not have exams'，主语是第三人称单数。'reminds'应为'remind'，与主语'calendar'一致。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I did not forgot them.

✓ I did not forget them.

助动词'did'后面应接动词原形，'forgot'是过去式，应改为'forget'。

× I will write it down on my calendars and make a ring to remind me one day before SO.

✓ I will write it down on my calendar and set a ring to remind me one day before.

'calendars'应为单数形式'calendar'，因为通常指个人的日历。'make a ring'表达不准确，应为'set a ring'或'set a reminder'。'SO'无意义，应删除。

× my calendar will reminds me so.

✓ my calendar will remind me.

情态动词'will'后动词用原形，'reminds'应改为'remind'。'so'多余，应删除。

× I will write them down. For example, I have a conference today and I have to have an presentation and write down the key points on my phone to remind me.

✓ I will write them down. For example, I have a conference today and I have to give a presentation, so I write down the key points on my phone to remind myself.

'have an presentation'中'article'错误，应为'a presentation'。'have to have'表达重复，改为'have to give'更自然。'write down'动作应与前文时态一致。'remind me'应为'remind myself'更合适。

× I will write it down on my calendar is to show that all I have one sister do these days.

✓ I will write it down on my calendar to show what I have to do these days.

句子结构混乱，'is to show that all I have one sister do these days'无意义，需重构。'to show what I have to do these days'表达清晰。