记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kosakata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta gunakan kosakata yang sesuai konteks. Hindari kalimat yang terputus-putus dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually write down important information in my notes and use a daily tracker app to keep my life organized and updated.

建议: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kesalahan tata bahasa. Sebaiknya gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana namun jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dengan baik.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. To prevent this, I always make notes, use a daily tracker app, and set alarms to remind me of my schedule.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kosakata yang tidak tepat. Cobalah untuk memberikan contoh yang spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap. Perhatikan juga penggunaan kata yang sesuai konteks.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time well. For example, I have to keep track of paying taxes and fulfilling my responsibilities. Also, I try to maintain a healthy lifestyle by eating nutritious food and getting enough sleep.

建议: Jawaban Anda sulit dipahami karena struktur kalimat yang tidak jelas dan kosakata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menjelaskan dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan teratur, serta gunakan kosakata yang sesuai untuk menjelaskan metode Anda mengingat hal penting.

示例: To remember important things, I use Google Calendar. It helps me by allowing me to set reminders with notes and alarms, so I don't forget my tasks. This method works very well for me.

× Yes, I'm good to remember this.

✓ Yes, I'm good at remembering this.

The phrase 'good to remember' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'good at remembering' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) to indicate skill or ability.

× I always right.

✓ I always write.

The word 'right' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'write' in the present tense. 'Right' is an adjective or noun, not a verb.

× About anything on my notes.

✓ I write about anything in my notes.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I write' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Then. I also using tracker.

✓ Then, I also use a tracker.

The phrase 'I also using' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I also use' because the present simple tense is needed here.

× Daily Tracker. Far update my life.

✓ I use a daily tracker to update my life.

The phrase 'Far update my life' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'to update my life' to express purpose correctly.

× I forgot something important thing to prevent it, I always make a note and use a daily tracker app to help me stay organized and update my update my schedule regularly.

✓ I forgot something important. To prevent it, I always make a note and use a daily tracker app to help me stay organized and update my schedule regularly.

The original sentence is a run-on and contains repetition ('update my update my'). Splitting into two sentences and removing repetition improves clarity and correctness.

× I also setting the alarm for it.

✓ I also set the alarm for it.

The phrase 'I also setting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I also set' because the present simple tense is required here.

× In daily life, it is important to remember to stay organized and manage time effectively.

✓ In daily life, it is important to remember to stay organized and manage time effectively.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× For example, keeping up with all this help me protest tax and applied for getting important responsibilities.

✓ For example, keeping up with all this helps me protect my tasks and apply for important responsibilities.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and unclear meaning. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Protest tax' is likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'protect my tasks' for clarity. 'Applied for getting' is incorrect; corrected to 'apply for'.

× Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle by eating well and getting enough.

✓ Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle by eating well and getting enough rest is important.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'is important' completes the sentence.

× Two, remember important things I said.

✓ To remember important things, I use...

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. It should start with 'To remember important things' followed by the method used.

× Google Calendar is really concept.

✓ Google Calendar is really convenient.

The word 'concept' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'convenient' to describe usefulness.

× Sign about my notes, alarm my description and how many times.

✓ I set reminders about my notes, alarms with descriptions, and how many times I will do it.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect words. 'Sign about' should be 'set reminders about'; 'alarm my description' should be 'alarms with descriptions'.

× That's good for me.

✓ That's good for me.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.