记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when I'm away from home. For example, I often forget my phone or notebook in the classroom and have to go back to get them.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如单复数和时态问题，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

示例: Yes, I once forgot to complete a big project assigned by my tutor, which resulted in a late submission. Because of this, my tutor was very angry. Since then, I have started planning my day and setting reminders on my smartphone.

建议: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，使表达更准确自然。

示例: For me, it's very important to remember special dates like my friends' or family members' birthdays and other significant events. These occasions help us maintain strong bonds and enjoy our friendships.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，正确使用动词形式，并清楚表达意思。

示例: With the development of technology, I usually use smartphone apps to remember important dates like my friends' or family members' birthdays. My phone reminds me in advance, so I can prepare gifts. It's very handy and convenient.

× I usually forgot my phone and my notebook in the classroom and I have to back to the classroom to find them.

✓ I usually forget my phone and my notebook in the classroom and I have to go back to the classroom to find them.

这里的动词时态应该是一般现在时，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。'forgot'是过去式，应该改为'forget'。另外，'have to back'缺少动词，应该是'have to go back'。

× I usually forgot my phone and my notebook in the classroom and I have to back to the classroom to find them.

✓ I usually forget my phone and my notebook in the classroom and I have to go back to the classroom to find them.

'forgot'是过去式，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'forget'。

× I once forgot to do a big projects that was assigned by my tutor which result in the later submission.

✓ I once forgot to do a big project that was assigned by my tutor which resulted in the late submission.

'projects'应为单数'project'，因为前面有形容词'big'修饰单数名词。

× I once forgot to do a big projects that was assigned by my tutor which result in the later submission.

✓ I once forgot to do a big project that was assigned by my tutor which resulted in the late submission.

'result'应为过去式'resulted'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× Because of this my tutor was very angry and since then I have started to plan my day an make reminders on my smart.

✓ Because of this my tutor was very angry and since then I have started to plan my day and make reminders on my smartphone.

'an'应为'and'，且'smart'应为'smartphone'。这里没有时态错误，但拼写错误需要纠正。

× For me it is very important to remember some special dates like my friends or family members birthday or some other significant events.

✓ For me it is very important to remember some special dates like my friends' or family members' birthdays or some other significant events.

'friends'和'family members'作为所有格，应该加撇号，且'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，因为指多个朋友和家庭成员的生日。

× This occasions are a way to bond, maintains strong bonds and enjoy our friendships, so I should remember them.

✓ These occasions are a way to bond, maintain strong bonds and enjoy our friendships, so I should remember them.

'This'应为复数形式'These'，因为修饰复数名词'occasions'。'maintains'应为原形'maintain'，因为主语是复数。

× This occasions are a way to bond, maintains strong bonds and enjoy our friendships, so I should remember them.

✓ These occasions are a way to bond, maintain strong bonds and enjoy our friendships, so I should remember them.

动词'maintain'和'enjoy'应与前面的动词形式一致，使用原形。

× I usually use my smartphone memorandum apps to memorize some special dates like my friends or family members birthday so my phone can reminds me in otherwise and I can prepare them for some gates.

✓ I usually use my smartphone memorandum apps to memorize some special dates like my friends' or family members' birthdays so my phone can remind me otherwise and I can prepare for some dates.

'friends'和'family members'应为所有格，'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'。'reminds'应为原形'remind'，因为主语是复数'apps'。'in otherwise'表达错误，应为'otherwise'。'gates'应为'dates'。

× I usually use my smartphone memorandum apps to memorize some special dates like my friends or family members birthday so my phone can reminds me in otherwise and I can prepare them for some gates.

✓ I usually use my smartphone memorandum apps to memorize some special dates like my friends' or family members' birthdays so my phone can remind me otherwise and I can prepare for some dates.

'reminds'是第三人称单数形式，但主语是复数'apps'，应使用原形'remind'。