记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较大问题，建议练习用简单句子直接回答问题，并尝试用具体例子支持观点。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and phone numbers without writing them down.

建议: 回答较简短且语法错误，建议使用完整句子并添加细节说明忘记手机的情境。

示例: Yes, once I forgot my phone when I went outside, and it was inconvenient because I couldn't contact my friends.

建议: 回答不完整且断断续续，建议用完整句子表达，并详细说明需要记住的具体事项。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my family's birthdays and my parents' wedding anniversary to celebrate with them.

建议: 回答不流畅且语法错误，建议用连贯的句子说明具体记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone or marking them on my calendar.

× I think I could add to memory says so for my.

✓ I think I could improve my memory.

原句结构混乱，表达不清晰。应使用简单明了的句子结构，表达“我认为我可以提高我的记忆力”。

× Be interesting to see.

✓ It would be interesting to see.

缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。应补充完整句子结构。

× But I don't.

✓ But I don't have a good memory.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致意思不明确。

× Interesting since I don't have memory.

✓ It's interesting since I don't have a good memory.

缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。

× Once I forgot my phone when I go outside.

✓ Once I forgot my phone when I went outside.

描述过去发生的事情，动词时态应使用过去式。

× And I can remember my family's birthday and my parents. Wedding. Anniversary's.

✓ I can remember my family's birthdays and my parents' wedding anniversary.

句子断裂，标点使用错误，所有格和复数形式错误。应连贯表达并正确使用标点和所有格。

× I remember. Important things always right on my phone. Or right on. Calendar.

✓ I always write important things on my phone or on my calendar.

句子断裂，缺少谓语，表达不完整。应使用完整句子表达意思。