记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“memories”应为“memorising”，“completes”应为“complete”，“scenes”应为“tasks”。句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和拼写，简洁明了地表达观点。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details easily. To manage this, I always make a to-do list or use a planner to remind myself of important tasks. This method helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇“to do list list”，语法错误如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的词汇和时态。

示例: Although I'm not good at memorising things, I have never forgotten anything important because I use a to-do list to remind myself. This method works well and helps me stay organized and punctual.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“master student”应为“a master's student”，“remember amount of amount of important points”表达重复且不准确。建议使用正确的名词短语和动词形式，表达更具体。

示例: As a master's student, I need to remember a lot of professional knowledge. I have to memorise many important points to pass my exams successfully.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“Will it's”应为“Well, it's”，“To list”重复且无意义。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，表达清晰。

示例: Well, I find it very useful to make a to-do list to remind myself of important tasks. For example, I use the Microsoft To Do app to create and manage my lists efficiently.

× Actually I am not very good at memories things because I tend to forget details easily.

✓ Actually I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details easily.

这里'memories things'中的'memories'是名词复数形式，但应使用动名词'memorising'表示记忆的动作。应使用动名词形式来表达“记忆事情”的意思。

× To help myself completes important things, I always make A to do list or planner to remind me to complete important scenes.

✓ To help myself complete important things, I always make a to-do list or planner to remind me to complete important tasks.

动词help后应接动词原形complete，而不是第三人称单数形式completes。且“scenes”应为“tasks”更符合语境。

× And this method helps me. Complete since.

✓ And this method helps me complete things on time.

原句断句错误，且“Complete since”不符合语法，应合并为完整句子表达方法帮助完成任务。

× Although I am not good at memory things, I never forget in something important because I make A to do list list to remind me to complete important things and this method worked very well and helps me big organized on time.

✓ Although I am not good at memorising things, I never forget something important because I make a to-do list to remind me to complete important things, and this method works very well and helps me stay organized on time.

'memory things'应为'memorising things'，'A to do list list'重复且大小写错误，应为'a to-do list'。动词时态应统一，'worked'改为'works'，'big organized'应为'stay organized'。

× As you know I am master student and there are a lot of professional knowledge to remember and I have to pass exam by remember amount of amount of important points to pass my exam.

✓ As you know, I am a master's student and there is a lot of professional knowledge to remember, and I have to pass the exam by remembering a large amount of important points.

'master student'应为'a master's student'，'there are a lot of professional knowledge'中knowledge是不可数名词，应使用单数动词'is'。'by remember'应为'by remembering'，动词后需用动名词形式。

× Will it's very interesting and useful for me to do A to do list to remind me to complete the important things.

✓ Well, it's very interesting and useful for me to make a to-do list to remind me to complete important things.

'Will'应为'Well'表示语气词，'do A to do list'应为'make a to-do list'，冠词'a'应小写，且'to do list'应连写为'to-do list'。

× For example, I use app To Do List of Microsoft to create a list. To list.

✓ For example, I use the Microsoft To Do List app to create a list.

句子断裂，'To list'无意义，应合并为完整句子。'app To Do List of Microsoft'应调整为'the Microsoft To Do List app'，符合英语习惯。