记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且存在语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单且正确的句子直接回答问题，并避免重复和冗余。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important dates and tasks.

建议: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议用完整句子描述具体事件，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I often forget my ID card when I go out. For example, last Friday I went to the high-speed railway station but realized I had left my ID card at home.

建议: 回答不连贯且有多处语法和发音错误。建议清晰列举需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember exam dates and anniversaries because they are very important to me.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，语法有误。建议用完整句子说明方法，并解释其优点。

示例: Sometimes, I make a list on my mobile phone. It is very convenient and helps me remember important things easily.

× Now I'm not good at memorizing things sometimes.

✓ Now I'm sometimes not good at memorizing things.

句子中副词'sometimes'的位置不当，应该放在动词前以符合英语习惯。

× I always forgot some important since and the work to do.

✓ I always forget some important things and the work to do.

这里描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时'forget'，而不是过去时'forgot'。

× Yes, I often forgot my ID cards when I go out.

✓ Yes, I often forget my ID cards when I go out.

描述经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时'forget'，而不是过去时'forgot'。

× Who is bumper last Friday?

✓ I was in a bumper last Friday.

句子结构错误，且时态不对。应使用过去时'I was in a bumper'表示“我上周五遇到了堵车”。

× I go. To the. High speed railway station, but I soon forgot my ID card Outback.

✓ I went to the high-speed railway station, but I soon forgot my ID card at the back.

句子断断续续且时态错误，应连贯表达并使用过去时。'Outback'应为'at the back'。

× Emending live, I need to remember the exam dates and anniversary dates.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the exam dates and anniversary dates.

'Emending live'是错误表达，应为'in my daily life'。

× A it also. Important from me.

✓ It is also important to me.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误，应使用'It is also important to me'。

× Aye. Cons Missing date.

✓ I often miss dates.

句子不完整且拼写错误，应表达为'I often miss dates'。

× Sometimes I always. Take a list in my mobile phone.

✓ Sometimes I always make a list on my mobile phone.

'Take a list'用法不当，应使用'make a list'。

× It is work convenient and it kind of. Help me to remember some important things.

✓ It is convenient and it kind of helps me to remember some important things.

'work convenient'应为'convenient'，且动词需加第三人称单数形式'helps'。