记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words. For example, instead of saying 'I save everything in my mind' and then repeating 'I save the dates', you can combine these ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things because I can easily remember important dates, such as my friends' birthdays.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar by structuring your answer properly and avoiding filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you forgot.

示例: Yes, sometimes I forget important events, such as attending family gatherings or my friend's wedding.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, be more specific about why drinking water is important.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like drinking water regularly because it is essential for maintaining good health.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your methods for remembering important things.

示例: Although I have a good memory, if I can't remember something specific, I write it in a notes app and set an alarm to remind me of the event.

× Yes, yes, sometimes I forget to do important things like attend in in our family event or something like that.

✓ Yes, yes, sometimes I forget to do important things like attending our family event or something like that.

The verb 'attend' should be followed by the gerund form 'attending' when used after 'like' to indicate an example of an activity. Also, the preposition 'in' is unnecessary here and repeated mistakenly.

× Yes, yes, sometimes I forget to do important things like attend in in our family event or something like that.

✓ Yes, yes, sometimes I forget to do important things like attending our family event or something like that.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used and repeated twice. The correct phrase is 'attending our family event' without any preposition.

× My friend wedding.

✓ My friend's wedding.

The phrase 'My friend wedding' lacks the possessive form. It should be 'My friend's wedding' to indicate the wedding belonging to the friend.

× I like to remember all important things like drinking water daily becaused drinking water is very important for our humanity.

✓ I like to remember all important things like drinking water daily because drinking water is very important for our health.

The word 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. Also, 'for our humanity' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for our health' to express the intended meaning.

× And the. That's it.

✓ And that's it.

The phrase 'And the.' is incomplete and unnecessary. It should be removed to form a complete sentence 'And that's it.'.

× As I mentioned, I already have a good memory, but if I can't remember a specific things I write it in the notes application and the aura.

✓ As I mentioned, I already have a good memory, but if I can't remember a specific thing, I write it in the notes application and the aura.

The phrase 'a specific things' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. It should be 'a specific thing' to match the singular article 'a'.

× As I mentioned, I already have a good memory, but if I can't remember a specific things I write it in the notes application and the aura. A maker remember alarm for this event.

✓ As I mentioned, I already have a good memory, but if I can't remember a specific thing, I write it in the notes application and set a reminder alarm for this event.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'A maker remember alarm' is incorrect and should be 'set a reminder alarm' to convey the intended meaning clearly.