记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用更准确的词汇。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things that interest me. For example, I enjoy learning English vocabulary and can remember new words quickly and for a long time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子，清晰描述事件，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once when I was going to college, I forgot my bank card. It was stressful because I was about to catch a plane.

建议: 回答较简短且断断续续，建议用完整句子表达，并用连接词连接观点，使回答更流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important work tasks and the things I have to buy for my kids.

建议: 回答不清楚且有语音识别错误，建议明确说明记忆方法，使用正确词汇和完整句子。

示例: To remember important things, I write them down on my phone and check them off once I have completed them.

× Actually, for some things I am good at memorizing.

✓ Actually, for some things I am good at memorizing.

该句无单复数错误，无需修改。

× So when it comes to the things, I'm quite interested.

✓ So when it comes to things, I'm quite interested.

“the things”中的定冠词“the”使用不当，表示泛指时不需要定冠词。

× I can remember English room or cavalry for long time.

✓ I can remember English words or vocabulary for a long time.

“English room”应为“English words”，“cavalry”错误，应为“vocabulary”；“for long time”缺少冠词，应为“for a long time”。

× Yes, of course I forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, of course I have forgotten something important.

“I forgotten”缺少助动词，应使用现在完成时“have forgotten”。

× It's normal for him beings to forget things.

✓ It's normal for human beings to forget things.

“him beings”错误，应为“human beings”，指人类。

× Once when I was sad to college.

✓ Once when I was going to college.

“was sad to college”结构错误，应为“was going to college”，表示去某地。

× I forgot my. A bank card.

✓ I forgot my bank card.

句子断裂，“my.”后不应有句号，应连成一句。

× Uh, what? I was about to catch a plane.

✓ Uh, I was about to catch a plane.

“what?”无意义，应删除，使句子通顺。

× In my daily life, I have to remember. Important work.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember important work.

句子断裂，“remember.”后不应有句号，应连成一句。

× And. Uh, the things I need to buy for my kids.

✓ And, uh, the things I need to buy for my kids.

句子断裂，“And.”后不应有句号，应连成一句。

× 4 important things to be down I will mark on my Valium.

✓ For important things to be done, I will mark on my calendar.

“4 important things to be down”表达错误，应为“For important things to be done”；“Valium”错误，应为“calendar”。

× Anne. I will check it if I've finished.

✓ And I will check it if I've finished.

“Anne.”应为连词“And”，且句子断裂，应连成一句。