记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'charter memorizing' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจน

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially for the long term. However, I usually make charts or notes to help me remember important information because I tend to forget things easily.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและทำให้คำตอบมีความสมเหตุสมผล

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, at work, I once forgot to inform a candidate about a signed letter, which was very important. This happened because I didn't take any notes to remind myself.

建议: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ ควรเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย

示例: The most important thing I need to remember daily is the balance in my bank account. I need to keep track of my money because I spend it every day, and if I forget the amount, I might not be able to buy what I need.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและทำให้คำตอบมีความสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

示例: I'm not very good at remembering things, so I usually write short notes or make a to-do list for the day. For example, I prepare a grocery list before going shopping to make sure I don't forget anything.

× I don't think that I'm good at memorizing things is that I'm good at charter memorizing, but it is a long term.

✓ I don't think that I'm good at memorizing things; I am good at chart memorizing, but it is long term.

The phrase 'charter memorizing' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; 'chart memorizing' is likely intended. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs a semicolon to separate two independent clauses. The use of 'memorizing' is correct as a gerund after 'good at'.

× Well, when I have to memorize thing I will have a chart note.

✓ Well, when I have to memorize things, I will have a chart note.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items to memorize. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, of course I have ever forgot something that's really important.

✓ Yes, of course I have ever forgotten something that's really important.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle 'forgotten' should be used. This is a verb form issue related to pronoun usage.

× When I'm working, I forget to tell my candidate about the sign letter.

✓ When I was working, I forgot to tell my candidate about the sign letter.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense 'was working' and 'forgot' should be used instead of present tense 'am working' and 'forget'.

× Is there that is really something that really important but I'm already forgotten because it's just that I've have not or take a note?

✓ There is something really important, but I have already forgotten it because I have not taken a note.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and verb form errors. 'I'm already forgotten' should be 'I have already forgotten it'. Also, 'I've have not or take a note' is incorrect; it should be 'I have not taken a note'.

× First of all I think that the thing that I need to remember is my money in my account because I I would like to know about the numbers of minor money as I will have to spend it everyday and sometime if I forgot about the number I think I cannot buy things.

✓ First of all, I think that the thing I need to remember is the money in my account because I would like to know the amount of money I have as I have to spend it every day, and sometimes if I forget the amount, I think I cannot buy things.

The phrase 'numbers of minor money' is incorrect; 'amount of money' is appropriate for uncountable nouns like money. Also, 'everyday' should be 'every day' as an adverbial phrase. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'.

× Well first of all I'm not good at remembering things but what I have to do is right thing or just have a short notes alise about the things that I have to do at that day.

✓ Well, first of all, I'm not good at remembering things, but what I have to do is write things down or just have short notes about the things I have to do that day.

The phrase 'right thing' should be 'write things down' (verb). 'Short notes alise' is unclear; likely 'short notes' is intended. 'At that day' should be 'that day' without 'at'.

× For example the the grocery list when I have to go to buy things at the soup.

✓ For example, the grocery list when I have to go to buy things at the shop.

The word 'soup' is a typo; it should be 'shop'. Also, a comma is needed after 'For example'.