记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct past participle forms and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I can easily remember the routes I have taken and quickly learn new information.

建议: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I was really numbers'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my hall ticket on the day of an exam, and I was very worried about what to do. However, I explained the situation to my teacher, and she kindly helped me.

建议: Make your sentences complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, be specific about what you write down.

示例: There are many things to remember in daily life, so I write important tasks and appointments in the Notes app on my phone because it is easy to use and helps me stay organised.

建议: Improve sentence structure and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to make your answer flow better and be more natural.

示例: I remember important things by writing them in the Notes app on my phone. This method is convenient because I can carry my phone anywhere and review my notes frequently to avoid forgetting anything.

× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things becaused wherever I go I remember the roads that I have went to and I'm also good at learning things.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things because wherever I go I remember the roads that I have been to and I'm also good at learning things.

The verb 'went' is the simple past tense, but here the present perfect tense 'have been' is appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'.

× Yes I did forget my hall ticket in the day of my exam and I was really numbers that what I will do now but I told my teacher about my situation and she helped me.

✓ Yes, I did forget my hall ticket on the day of my exam and I was really nervous about what I would do then but I told my teacher about my situation and she helped me.

The phrase 'in the day of my exam' should be 'on the day of my exam' (preposition correction). 'Numbers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'nervous' (word choice). 'That what I will do now' is incorrect; it should be 'about what I would do then' to match past tense and correct sentence structure.

× Yes I did forget my hall ticket in the day of my exam and I was really numbers that what I will do now but I told my teacher about my situation and she helped me.

✓ Yes, I did forget my hall ticket on the day of my exam and I was really nervous about what I would do then but I told my teacher about my situation and she helped me.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to specific days.

× There are many things to remember in your daily life, so I write my things. In my notes on my phone so I can easily. Is it member things and it is very easy to operate.

✓ There are many things to remember in daily life, so I write them in my notes on my phone so I can easily remember things and it is very easy to operate.

The pronoun usage is inconsistent and unclear. 'My things' should be 'them' referring to 'things'. The sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity. 'Is it member things' is incorrect and should be 'so I can easily remember things'.

× There are many things to remember in your daily life, so I write my things. In my notes on my phone so I can easily. Is it member things and it is very easy to operate.

✓ There are many things to remember in daily life, so I write them in my notes on my phone so I can easily remember things and it is very easy to operate.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I remember my important things by writing them on Notes app on my phone. This method is very easy and I can carry it anywhere and I rechecked it many times that I don't forget. Anything.

✓ I remember important things by writing them on the Notes app on my phone. This method is very easy and I can carry it anywhere, and I recheck it many times so that I don't forget anything.

'My important things' is better as 'important things' for general reference. 'Notes app' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Rechecked' should be 'recheck' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence 'I rechecked it many times that I don't forget. Anything.' is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.