记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to bring important items to my office. To improve, I try to write reminders on my phone.

建议: 回答中断断续续，信息不完整且表达不清晰。建议用完整句子描述具体事件，并使用连接词使叙述连贯。

示例: Yes, I once forgot the time of my flight during summer vacation. I booked a ticket to return to my university but arrived late at the airport because I didn't check the schedule carefully.

建议: 回答内容较为模糊，词汇使用不准确。建议明确具体需要记住的事项，并用恰当词汇表达。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember homework deadlines and to submit my projects on time. Sometimes, I also have to upload code and complete data analysis for my online courses.

建议: 表达不够连贯，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，合理使用连接词，并清晰描述记忆方法。

示例: I usually type reminders on my phone. Sometimes, I write notes at the office and ask my colleagues to remind me about important tasks.

× If you told me something else today, then I will turn around and forgot it.

✓ If you told me something else today, then I would turn around and forget it.

这里是虚拟语气，表示假设情况，主句应使用would加动词原形，不能用will和过去式forgot。

× I always forgot to take things to my office or just forgot.

✓ I always forget to take things to my office or just forget.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时forget，而不是过去式forgot。

× What shall I do today and if somebody asked me for her?

✓ What shall I do today if somebody asks me for her?

句子结构混乱，连接词使用不当，应将两个部分合并成条件句，使用if引导，且时态保持一致。

× Oh yes, there was a time I remember. Is. In. Summer vacation.

✓ Oh yes, there was a time I remember. It was in summer vacation.

句子缺少谓语动词，且时态应为过去时，补充it was使句子完整。

× I book a ticket back to my university.

✓ I booked a ticket back to my university.

描述过去发生的动作，动词book应使用过去式booked。

× Ann. I forgot the time when I got to the rope airport.

✓ And I forgot the time when I got to the airport.

句子中“Ann”和“rope”无意义，应删除或更正为正确单词，保持句子通顺。

× The flight or the plan was.

✓ The flight or the plane was delayed.

句子不完整，且plan应为plane，需补充谓语使句子完整。

× Oh yes, it's some homework tools.

✓ Oh yes, it's some homework tasks.

homework是不可数名词，不能用tools，应改为tasks或assignments。

× I have a lot of homework deadlines because I am learning and analytics on the Internet.

✓ I have a lot of homework deadlines because I am learning analytics on the Internet.

and前后词性不一致，应去掉and，使句子通顺。

× So I have to finish the project or sometimes to upload the code alright and analysis as well.

✓ So I have to finish the project or sometimes upload the code and analysis as well.

句子中“alright”用法错误，且不需要to，调整句子结构使其更自然。

× I would type in my phone and also sometimes if I am in the office I will write it down and.

✓ I would type it into my phone and also sometimes, if I am in the office, I will write it down.

动词搭配错误，应为type into，且句子末尾不应以and结尾。

× Just tell my colleagues I will do something at some time.

✓ I just tell my colleagues I will do something at some time.

缺少主语，句子不完整，应加上主语I。

× Please remember me. Just like this. Ask for help will help him.

✓ Please remind me. Just like this. Asking for help will help me.

remember me用法错误，应为remind me；后半句主语和宾语不一致，应统一为第一人称。