记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“grabs”应为“grasp”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，同时避免重复表达。

示例: Honestly, I am not very good at memorizing things. To fully grasp information, I need to review it several times.

建议: 回答中出现了无关词汇“Proteins”，且“sub sific”应为“sufficient”，影响表达清晰度。建议避免无关内容，注意拼写和用词准确，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: No, I don't think I have ever forgotten anything important. If something is crucial, I usually set an alarm to remind me. For example, before an exam, I make sufficient study plans to prepare on time.

建议: 回答开头像是反问，且句子结构不完整。部分表达不自然，如“make my day either”。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: I try to remember important moments from the day, especially times with people I am grateful for. For instance, today my friend Joe helped me prepare a meal, which really made my day. I often write these events in a journal before bed to keep track.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，如“As my mentioned”和“Recover my memory”。建议使用完整且连贯的句子，清晰表达方法和原因。

示例: As I mentioned before, I usually write important things in my notebook or set alarms on my phone. This helps me remember when I see my notes or hear the alarm.

× In order to fully grabs something I have to keep reviewing them for many times.

✓ In order to fully grasp something, I have to keep reviewing it many times.

The verb 'grabs' is incorrectly used here; after 'to fully', the base form 'grasp' should be used instead of 'grabs'. Also, 'them' should be 'it' to agree with the singular 'something'. Additionally, 'for many times' is incorrect; it should be 'many times'.

× In order to fully grabs something I have to keep reviewing them for many times.

✓ In order to fully grasp something, I have to keep reviewing it many times.

The pronoun 'them' does not agree with the singular noun 'something'. It should be 'it' to maintain singular agreement.

× Proteins.

✓ Probably 'Probably'.

The word 'Proteins' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'Probably', which fits the context better as a modal adverb indicating likelihood.

× For example, before an exam I would make sub sific study plans to ensure that I could prepare them in time.

✓ For example, before an exam I would make sufficient study plans to ensure that I could prepare in time.

The word 'sub sific' is a misspelling of 'sufficient'. Also, 'prepare them' is awkward; 'prepare in time' is more natural here.

× For example, before an exam I would make sub sific study plans to ensure that I could prepare them in time.

✓ For example, before an exam I would make sufficient study plans to ensure that I could prepare in time.

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and unclear here; 'prepare in time' is sufficient and clearer.

× Are you really trying to remember the important things that happened during the day, especially moments with people I feel grateful for.

✓ I really try to remember the important things that happened during the day, especially moments with people I feel grateful for.

The original sentence is structured as a question but the meaning is a statement. Changing it to a statement corrects the sentence structure.

× I was really thankful to my friend Joe because he helped me to prepare the meal which make my day either.

✓ I was really thankful to my friend Joe because he helped me prepare the meal which made my day too.

The phrase 'helped me to prepare' is acceptable but 'helped me prepare' is more natural. 'Make' should be past tense 'made' to agree with the past event. 'Either' is incorrect here; 'too' is appropriate.

× I was really thankful to my friend Joe because he helped me to prepare the meal which make my day either.

✓ I was really thankful to my friend Joe because he helped me prepare the meal which made my day too.

The verb 'make' should be in past tense 'made' to match the past tense context.

× I often write down this important event in a journal before going to bed to keep track.

✓ I often write down these important events in a journal before going to bed to keep track.

The phrase 'keep track' usually requires 'of' after it, but here it is implied. Also, 'this important event' should be plural 'these important events' to match the habitual action.

× As my mentioned.

✓ As I mentioned.

The phrase 'As my mentioned' is incorrect; it should be 'As I mentioned' to correctly use the first person subject pronoun and verb.

× This will help me too. Recover my memory when I see my notes or hear the alarm.

✓ This will help me too, recover my memory when I see my notes or hear the alarm.

The sentence is fragmented. Combining the two parts with a comma makes it a complete sentence. Also, 'recover' should be lowercase as it continues the sentence.