记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“key”应为复数形式“keys”，且句子结构略显重复。建议注意单复数形式，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, I often forget to bring my keys and phone when I go out, which is quite frustrating. Therefore, I'm trying to use strategies like making a checklist to help me remember important items.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“make”应为“made”，“issue”应为“she”，且表达不够连贯。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel very regretful. To make it up to her, I sincerely apologized and prepared a small gift. Fortunately, she was very kind and forgave me immediately.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱的问题，句子不完整且含糊。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并具体列举需要记住的事项。

示例: There are many things I need to remember daily, such as tasks, deadlines, my schedule, and class times. For example, when I have an exam, I make sure to write it down on my To Do List.

建议: 回答中时态使用不当，如“noted”应为“note”，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

示例: I often note important things in my To Do List because when I look at it, it reminds me immediately. This helps me manage my time better and ensures I finish or prepare everything on time. For example, if I have a meeting, I always write it down.

× I often forget to bring key and phone when I go out, which is very frustrating for me.

✓ I often forget to bring my keys and phone when I go out, which is very frustrating for me.

这里“key”应使用复数形式“keys”，因为通常人们有多把钥匙；同时缺少了物主代词“my”，使句子更完整自然。

× So I'm trying to develop some strategies like checklist to help me to avoid it.

✓ So I'm trying to develop some strategies like a checklist to help me avoid it.

“checklist”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示“一个清单”；“help me to avoid it”中“to”可省略，更地道。

× I have forgotten my best friends birthday, which make me very regretful.

✓ I have forgotten my best friend's birthday, which makes me very regretful.

“best friends birthday”应为“best friend's birthday”，表示“我最好的朋友的生日”，需要所有格；“make”应与单数主语“which”保持一致，改为“makes”。

× which make me very regretful.

✓ which makes me very regretful.

关系代词“which”指代单数“birthday”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× To make it up for her, I apologized to her sincerely and prepared a small gift to her.

✓ To make it up to her, I apologized sincerely and prepared a small gift for her.

短语应为“make it up to someone”，而非“for”；“apologized to her sincerely”中“to her”可省略；“prepared a small gift for her”中介词应为“for”。

× Fortunately, issue is very kind and forgives me immediately.

✓ Fortunately, she is very kind and forgives me immediately.

“issue”应为“she”，指代前文的“her”，是人称代词错误。

× Oh, there are so many things of for me to remember.

✓ Oh, there are so many things for me to remember.

“of for”是错误的重复介词，应去掉“of”，只保留“for”。

× I need to remember that ask, the deadline, the schedule and the when I need to have class.

✓ I need to remember the tasks, the deadline, the schedule, and when I need to have class.

原句结构混乱，“that ask”不合适，应改为“the tasks”；“the when”错误，去掉“the”。

× When I have a I have an exam, I need to write it on my To Do List.

✓ When I have an exam, I need to write it on my To Do List.

“When I have a I have an exam”重复且多余，应删去多余部分。

× I often noted down in my To Do List book 'cause when I say this list it reminds me immediately so I can manage my time better and make sure I can finish or prepare everything on time.

✓ I often note down in my To Do List book because when I see this list it reminds me immediately so I can manage my time better and make sure I can finish or prepare everything on time.

“noted”应为一般现在时“note”，因为描述习惯动作；“say”应为“see”，因为是看列表；“'cause”口语中可用，但正式写作建议用“because”。

× For example, if I have a meeting I will write it down.

✓ For example, if I have a meeting, I will write it down.

在“meeting”和“if”条件状语之间应加逗号，改善句子结构。