记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

示例: I used to have a good memory about ten years ago, but now I find it harder to memorize things.

建议: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子表达具体事件，并注意词汇的准确性。

示例: Yes, I sometimes forget important things. For example, a few months ago I forgot my mom's birthday, which made her very upset. I understand why she felt that way.

建议: 回答内容混乱，句子不完整，难以理解。建议先理清思路，用完整句子表达日常需要记住的具体事项。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, messages from clients, and study materials that I have to review.

建议: 回答较简短且有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议扩展回答，说明使用提醒应用的具体原因和效果。

示例: I prefer to use reminder apps on my phone because they help me keep track of important tasks and prevent me from forgetting them.

× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing's now.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing now.

这里错误地使用了“memorizing's”，正确形式是动名词“memorizing”，不需要加's。动名词作为名词使用时不加所有格。

× Maybe. 10 years ago I have good memory.

✓ Maybe. 10 years ago I had a good memory.

句子描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态“had”而不是现在时“have”。

× But now I think my memory, my memorizing ability is bad a lot.

✓ But now I think my memory, my memorizing ability is much worse.

“bad a lot”表达不自然，应该用比较级“much worse”来表达记忆力变差的意思。

× Yes, I do sometimes forget important sense.

✓ Yes, I sometimes forget important things.

“sense”用词不当，应使用“things”表示“重要的事情”；另外，“do sometimes forget”中“do”可省略，且“sometimes”位置调整更自然。

× For example, a few months ago I forgot my mom's birthday.

✓ For example, a few months ago I forgot my mom's birthday.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× Shay was very angry and said also I sent a better gifts but she also needs a few times to forgive me.

✓ She was very angry and said that I sent better gifts, but she also needed some time to forgive me.

句子结构混乱，需调整语序和用词，“Shay”应为“She”，“said also”应为“said that”，“a better gifts”应为“better gifts”，“needs a few times”应为“needed some time”。

× I do understand her feelings after that.

✓ I do understand her feelings after that.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× In my daily life arising, I need to remember.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember things.

“arising”用法错误，且句子不完整，需补充宾语“things”使句子完整。

× Some important since like.

✓ Some important things like that.

“since”用词错误，应为“things”，且句子不完整，需补充内容使其通顺。

× Others from important clients.

✓ Others are from important clients.

句子缺少谓语动词，需加“are”使句子完整。

× Some study all important message are.

✓ Some study all important messages.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的“are”，并将“message”改为复数“messages”。

× That who I need to send.

✓ Those are what I need to send.

句子结构错误，“That who”应改为“Those are what”，使句子完整且语法正确。

× No, there's.

✓ No, there isn't.

回答否定时应使用“there isn't”表示“没有”，而不是“there's”（there is的缩写）。

× I prefer to use some reminder app to avoid forgetting it it.

✓ I prefer to use some reminder app to avoid forgetting it.

重复使用“it”是错误的，应去掉多余的“it”。

× There are so many convenient apps.

✓ There are so many convenient apps.

此句语法正确，无需修改。