记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中語法和句子結構不夠清晰，導致表達不自然且難以理解。建議你在回答時使用完整且正確的句子，並避免重複或不連貫的片語。此外，可以嘗試用更具體的例子來說明你如何記憶事物。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. Usually, I take photos with my camera to help me remember important scenes or details. I find that looking at these photos later helps me recall information more easily.

建议: 你的回答有語法錯誤且句子結構不完整，影響表達的清晰度。建議你使用正確的時態和連接詞，並且組織句子使其更流暢。此外，可以加入更多細節來豐富回答內容。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday because I didn't write it down in my schedule. When she reminded me, I felt very scared because I thought she would be angry.

建议: 你的回答不夠完整且語句不連貫，讓人難以理解。建議你在回答時先明確表達主題句，然後用連接詞組織支持細節，並避免使用不確定的語氣詞。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule and plans with my friends. If they ask me to do something or go out, I write it down in my schedule to avoid forgetting.

建议: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不連貫的句子，影響表達效果。建議你使用完整句子並清楚說明你使用的方法，使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

示例: I usually write important things on a planner or use the calendar app on my phone. This helps me organize my time and manage tasks so I don't forget important events.

× Yeah, I'm good at memorizing things are usually use the camera to photos it and the photo came memorizing the thing I think is the way. I very like. To memorizing scene. And.

✓ Yeah, I'm good at memorizing things. I usually use the camera to take photos of them, and the photos help me memorize things. I really like memorizing scenes.

The original sentence misuses the verb forms and sentence structure. 'Use the camera to photos it' is incorrect; it should be 'use the camera to take photos of them'. Also, 'came memorizing the thing' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'the photos help me memorize things'. 'I very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like'. The verb 'memorizing' should be used as a gerund or in correct sentence structure. Improving sentence clarity and verb forms is necessary.

× Yes, I had forgotten something important is my mother's birthday. I forgot it and I forgot to write down my schedule so when I get it off and my mom tell me is her birthday and I was so scared that he's angry.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important: my mother's birthday. I forgot it and forgot to write down my schedule, so when I got off work, my mom told me it was her birthday, and I was so scared that she would be angry.

The original sentence has incorrect past tense usage and sentence structure. 'I had forgotten' is unnecessary here; simple past 'I forgot' is better. 'When I get it off' should be 'when I got off work'. 'My mom tell me is her birthday' should be 'my mom told me it was her birthday'. 'He's angry' is incorrect pronoun and tense; it should be 'she would be angry'. Correct past tense and pronoun usage improve clarity.

× Oh, I need to remember uh will look work schedule or? And my friend. Add. Want me to do something or go with them? And. I will write it on my schedule and.

✓ Oh, I need to remember to check my work schedule. Also, if my friends want me to do something or go with them, I will write it on my schedule.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect preposition and sentence structure. 'Will look work schedule' should be 'to check my work schedule'. 'My friend. Add.' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'if my friends want me to do something or go with them'. Proper prepositions and sentence flow are necessary for clarity.

× Are you sure wise on the lender or use the phone? App Calendar app. And it will help me to organize the time and help me to management. And the time. And I don't have to forget the important thing.

✓ I usually use a planner or the phone's calendar app. It helps me organize my time and manage it, so I don't forget important things.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and has fragmented sentences. 'Are you sure wise on the lender or use the phone?' is unclear; corrected to 'I usually use a planner or the phone's calendar app'. 'Help me to management' is incorrect; should be 'help me manage'. Using proper conjunctions and complete sentences improves clarity and grammar.