记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用错误较多，建议练习简单句型表达，避免重复和不必要的词汇，回答时要直接回应问题并给出具体例子。

示例: I am not very good at memorising things, but it depends on the situation. For example, I can easily remember simple facts, but I find it hard to memorise long information.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误严重，建议先理清思路，用简单句表达忘记重要事情的经历，并说明原因。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot to bring my ID card to school because I was very tired.

建议: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议用简单明了的句子说明日常需要记住的事情，并解释原因。

示例: I am a student, so I need to remember my class schedule and homework. It is important because my teacher gets angry if I am late or forget my homework.

建议: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，建议用简单句说明记忆重要事情的方法，并举例说明。

示例: I usually write important things on my mobile phone or send a text message to remind myself. This helps me not to forget important tasks.

× Not already and I think later.

✓ Not really, but I think later.

这里的 'already' 用法不正确，应该用 'really' 来表达否定的意思，且句子缺少谓语动词，需补充完整。

× Depends on the situations.

✓ It depends on the situations.

句子缺少主语，完整句子应为 'It depends on the situations.'。

× Which I meet.

✓ Which I encounter.

'Which I meet' 结构不完整且用词不当，应该用 'encounter' 更符合语境。

× Uh, when I meet some easy says, I think it's very easy to memory at one.

✓ Uh, when I meet some easy things, I think it's very easy to memorize them at once.

'easy says' 应为 'easy things'，'memory' 应为动词 'memorize'，'at one' 应为 'at once'。

× I think his heart, I hate it and I kind of memory.

✓ I think in my heart, I hate it and I kind of memorize.

句子结构混乱，'his heart' 应为 'my heart'，'memory' 应为动词 'memorize'。

× Of course, on I think are most heard of people will forgot some importances at some special time because one people are logical died.

✓ Of course, I think most people have forgotten some important things at special times because people are logically tired.

'will forgot' 应为现在完成时 'have forgotten'，'importances' 应为不可数名词 'important things'，'logical died' 应为 'logically tired'。

× Sunken eyes and 'cause they are manda can to contain important.

✓ They have sunken eyes because they are mentally unable to retain important information.

句子结构混乱，'manda can to contain important' 无意义，应改为 'mentally unable to retain important information'。

× Hello I am a student so I need to remember my daily class time.

✓ Hello, I am a student, so I need to remember my daily class schedule.

句子缺少逗号分隔，'class time' 更自然表达为 'class schedule'。

× Under the hammer Homework because our teacher is.

✓ I need to do my homework because our teacher is strict.

'Under the hammer Homework' 无意义，应改为 'do my homework'，句子不完整需补充谓语。

× Not good you love.

✓ Not good, you know.

'you love' 应为 'you know'，表达更自然。

× So I should remember the first time under.

✓ So I should remember to be on time.

'the first time under' 无意义，应改为 'to be on time'。

× Don't be late or he will be angry.

✓ I shouldn't be late or the teacher will be angry.

句子主语不明确，应明确为 'I'，且 'he' 指代不清。

× Well, I have some more important things to remember.

✓ Well, I have some important things to remember.

'some more important things' 语义重复，简化为 'some important things' 更合适。

× Are you only write it in my.

✓ I only write it down.

句子结构错误，'Are you' 不合适，应为 'I'，且缺少动词补充。

× Imma text her.

✓ I will text her.

'Imma' 是口语缩写，正式表达应为 'I will'。

× Illa mobile phone because I can't remember it to you my brother, so I have to write it.

✓ I use my mobile phone because I can't remember it, so I have to write it down.

句子结构混乱，'Illa' 应为 'I use my'，'can't remember it to you my brother' 不通顺，应删去或改为 'can't remember it'。