记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I once memorised over 300 words in 100 minutes, which helped me a lot in my studies.

建议: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，缺乏明确的主题句和支持细节。建议先明确回答是否忘记过重要事情，然后用具体情境说明。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes, especially when I am in a hurry. For instance, I once forgot some important documents because I was rushing to get ready for a meeting.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接说明日常需要记住的事情，并用具体细节支持。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, but the most important is to finish all my tasks on time. I usually check my tablet to keep track of my schedule.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，影响理解。建议简化句子，清楚说明记忆方法，并举例说明。

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in a To-Do List. I also use my phone's reminder app to make sure I don't forget any important tasks.

× Yes, I'm tired too at memorizing things 'cause I have developed it happen.

✓ Yes, I'm tired of memorizing things because I have developed it over time.

这里应该使用介词短语'tired of'，而不是'tired too at'。'memorizing'作为动名词形式是正确的，但句子结构不清晰，需调整。

× It's overtime, remember in Africa with more than 300 words in 100 minutes.

✓ It's over time; I remember in Africa more than 300 words in 100 minutes.

'overtime'应为'over time'表示逐渐发生，且句子缺少谓语动词，需调整句子结构。

× And still it's really helpful in my studies and the baby.

✓ And still, it's really helpful in my studies and with the baby.

'the baby'前应加介词'with'，表示对婴儿的帮助，且句子缺少连接词。

× As I said before, I'm tried to anima rising things but sometimes when I'm in a hurry or his dresser unexpected bring something in organizing with lighting parties or some documents.

✓ As I said before, I try to memorize things, but sometimes when I'm in a hurry or something unexpected happens, I bring something to organize with lighting parties or some documents.

'I'm tried'应为'I try'，时态错误；'anima rising'应为'memorize'；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× There are many things I need to remember in my bed and I've got the most important thing for me is to finish all my tasks on time if I don't complete from my tablet.

✓ There are many things I need to remember in my head, and the most important thing for me is to finish all my tasks on time; if I don't complete them, I use my tablet.

'in my bed'应为'in my head'；句子结构不完整，缺少连接词和代词。

× Uh, by the end of the day and then it's miss you answers.

✓ By the end of the day, I might miss some answers.

句子结构混乱，'miss you answers'应为'miss some answers'，且缺少主语。

× I want effective way I remember important things is by writing them down tonight schedule or To Do List.

✓ The effective way I remember important things is by writing them down in tonight's schedule or To-Do List.

形容词顺序错误，且缺少冠词和介词。

× I usually use my phones carrying her active are sad reminders so that I don't forget anything important task.

✓ I usually use my phone's calendar or reminders so that I don't forget any important tasks.

句子中'phones carrying her active are sad reminders'无意义，需改为正确表达手机功能的短语。