记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确的单词拼写，并且尽量用完整的句子表达观点。

示例: No, I'm not good at memorising things. I often forget my belongings, and just last week, I lost my Apple Watch, which made me very sad.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如动词时态不一致，句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯，同时注意动词形式的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I have a poor memory. Just last week, I lost my Apple Watch, which made me very upset because it helps me track my daily activities and is very useful.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，句子不完整且有拼写错误，表达混乱。建议先明确回答问题，然后用完整且连贯的句子详细说明。

示例: I need to remember to check the weather forecast every day because the weather in Beijing is unpredictable. This helps me decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella.

建议: 回答语句不完整且重复，表达不清晰。建议用完整的句子说明你如何记住重要的事情，并且避免重复。

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in a notebook, especially in a to-do list, which I review every morning.

× I had a bad memories and I often forgot my.

✓ I had bad memories and I often forgot mine.

这里的'memories'是复数，前面的限定词应为复数形式，且'my'后面应有名词或用mine代替。应改为'I had bad memories'，且'forgot my'不完整，应改为'forgot mine'。

× Belongings.

✓ my belongings.

单独的'Belongings.'不是完整句子，缺少主语或谓语，应与前句合并或补充完整。

× Last awake I lose my ipur watch.

✓ Last week I lost my Apple Watch.

'Last awake'应为'Last week'，表示过去时间；'lose'应使用过去式'lost'，且'ipur watch'应为'Apple Watch'。

× which make me very upset.

✓ which makes me very upset.

关系代词引导的定语从句中，主语是单数'Apple Watch'，谓语动词应加-s，变为'makes'。

× Because it can help me to track with my daily life and it's very helpful.

✓ It can help me track my daily life, and it's very helpful.

句子以'Because'开头，导致句子结构不完整，应改为完整句子。'help me to track with my daily life'表达不自然，应改为'help me track my daily life'。

× Checking the weather forecast becouse Beijing.

✓ Checking the weather forecast because of Beijing.

'because'拼写错误，应为'because'；'because Beijing'缺少介词，正确表达应为'because of Beijing'。

× The water in Beijing is unpredictable and things I rag runner back daily.

✓ The weather in Beijing is unpredictable, and things I run back daily.

'The water in Beijing'应为'the weather in Beijing'；'things I rag runner back daily'语序混乱且单词错误，应为'things I run back daily'或更合适表达。

× I should make sure if it will ring.

✓ I should make sure whether it will rain.

'ring'应为'rain'，且表达应为'make sure whether it will rain'，表示确认是否会下雨。

× Well, I keep. Remember or active Remember important things.

✓ Well, I keep remembering or actively remember important things.

句子断裂，'keep.'后应接动词-ing形式，且'active Remember'应为'adactively remember'。

× Through writing down into notebook is specially the To Do List as well which are well.

✓ I do this by writing things down into a notebook, especially the To Do List, which works well.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整，应重组句子使其通顺。

× Do every morning, every morning, and I will.

✓ I do this every morning, and I will continue to do so.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，应补充完整表达。