记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then explaining your method with clear linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially important events like meetings or exams. Therefore, I usually set reminders on my phone so that I don't forget them.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific examples to make your answer more effective.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as college assignments. Sometimes, my friends remind me about the work I need to complete, which helps me remember.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and difficult to understand. Try to organise your thoughts into clear sentences, use appropriate linking words, and be specific about what you need to remember daily.

示例: As a student, I need to remember important dates like exam schedules and daily tasks such as completing assignments given by my teachers after college.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly in complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Although I struggle to remember things, I use my phone to set reminders for important events so that I don't forget them in the coming days.

× I'm not good at memorizing things sometimes, like whether it's an important meeting or I have some exam, then I just put a reminder in my phone so that I will get to know what event is.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things sometimes, like whether it's an important meeting or I have some exam, so I just put a reminder in my phone so that I will know what the event is.

The phrase 'get to know' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'know' because 'get to know' implies becoming familiar over time, which doesn't fit the context. Also, 'then' is better replaced with 'so' to indicate purpose. Additionally, 'what event is' should be 'what the event is' to maintain correct word order in indirect questions.

× Oh yes, I did like sometimes.

✓ Oh yes, I did sometimes.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect here; it should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct. 'Did sometimes' correctly indicates past tense with frequency.

× I usually forget about.

✓ I usually forget about things.

The sentence is incomplete because 'forget about' requires an object. Adding 'things' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× The assignment like my college assignments then my friend used to tell me that we have to do that work then I just. It's just.

✓ The assignments, like my college assignments, sometimes I forget. Then my friend used to tell me that we have to do that work, and I just... It's just...

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Adding commas and breaking into smaller sentences improves clarity. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match context. The sentence ends with incomplete thoughts, which is acceptable in spoken language but should be indicated with ellipses.

× As a student in my daily life, I used to remember.

✓ As a student in my daily life, I remember.

'Used to' implies a past habit, but the context is about current daily life, so the present tense 'remember' is appropriate.

× Lake. When are exams coming and?

✓ Like, when are exams coming?

'Lake' is a mispronunciation or typo of 'like', which is used as a filler word here. Also, the question mark should come after the complete question 'When are exams coming?'

× What I have to do in a day, like after college would assignments my letters have given me, and I have to do that.

✓ What I have to do in a day, like after college, would be assignments my lecturers have given me, and I have to do them.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Would assignments my letters have given me' is incorrect; it should be 'would be assignments my lecturers have given me'. Also, 'letters' is likely a mishearing of 'lecturers'. 'I have to do that' should be 'I have to do them' to refer to assignments plural.

× I'm not good at remembering things, but to avoid. Delays.

✓ I'm not good at remembering things, but to avoid delays,

The phrase 'to avoid. Delays.' is fragmented. It should be combined into 'to avoid delays,' to connect the idea properly.

× I remember things by adding reminders through my phone so that I won't forget. Unimportant even that I have in upcoming days.

✓ I remember things by adding reminders through my phone so that I won't forget important events that I have in the upcoming days.

'Unimportant even' is incorrect; it should be 'important events'. Also, 'in upcoming days' needs the definite article 'the' to be 'in the upcoming days'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper article usage.