记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and coherent sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'a curling mind memory' and 'align on Knox or'.

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things naturally, so I rely on technology like my mobile phone to remind me about important tasks.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'busy all strikes' and 'true remind me'. Use simple, clear sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things when I am very busy. Therefore, I usually ask my parents or friends to remind me.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like 'in my deal' and 'deep rooted deep'. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain with specific details using correct vocabulary.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule and tasks, so I write them down to stay organized and not forget anything.

建议: Your answer has many unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your methods of remembering important things.

示例: I remember important things by setting alarms on my phone and asking my friends or colleagues to remind me. Additionally, I write notes in my notebook.

× I am stronger in memorizing or a curling mind memory, so I have to align on Knox or.

✓ I am stronger in memorizing or using a curling mind memory, so I have to rely on Knox or.

The phrase 'a curling mind memory' is unclear and likely incorrect. The verb 'using' is needed to correctly express the action related to 'mind memory'. Also, 'align on Knox' is incorrect; 'rely on Knox' is more appropriate. The main issue is the incorrect verb form and unclear phrase.

× so I have to align on Knox or.

✓ so I have to rely on Knox or.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'rely', but 'align on' is not appropriate in this context. The correct phrase is 'rely on' when depending on something.

× Technology devices like mobile phone to remind me about things.

✓ Technology devices like mobile phones to remind me about things.

The noun 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match the plural 'devices'. Also, the sentence is a fragment and needs to be connected properly, but the main issue is the singular/plural mismatch.

× Yes, I really forgot about important things when I am. Busy all strikes.

✓ Yes, I really forgot about important things when I was busy all the time.

The verb tense should be past tense 'was' to match the past action 'forgot'. Also, 'all strikes' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'all the time' fits better. The main issue is incorrect tense and unclear phrase.

× So I asked my parents or friends true remind me.

✓ So I asked my parents or friends to remind me.

The preposition 'true' is incorrect; the correct infinitive marker is 'to'. This is a common error in preposition usage.

× In my deal, I have to record my daily routing schedule in order to make my deep rooted deep.

✓ In my daily life, I have to record my daily routine schedule in order to make my deep rooted plan.

'Deal' should be 'daily life'. 'Routing' should be 'routine'. 'Deep rooted deep' is unclear; likely 'deep rooted plan' or 'deep rooted habit' is intended. The main issue is incorrect word choice and preposition usage.

× I remembered my important things true setting alone in my phone or ex, my friends or college to remind me.

✓ I remember my important things by setting alarms on my phone or asking my friends or college to remind me.

The verb 'remembered' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'remember'. 'True' should be 'by'. 'Setting alone' should be 'setting alarms'. 'Ex' is unclear, likely 'asking'. The main issues are tense and incorrect prepositions.

× I remembered my important things true setting alone in my phone or ex, my friends or college to remind me.

✓ I remember my important things by setting alarms on my phone or asking my friends or college to remind me.

The preposition 'true' is incorrect; 'by' is the correct preposition to indicate the method. Also, 'setting alone' is incorrect; 'setting alarms' is appropriate.

× Moreover, I also makes nose end. Winds in my notebook.

✓ Moreover, I also make notes and write reminders in my notebook.

'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Nose end. Winds' is a mishearing or typo for 'notes and reminders'. The main issues are subject-verb agreement and incorrect word usage.