记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充具体细节，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, I think I am good at memorising things. For example, as a graduate student, I have to remember many rules and laws, so I practice memorising regularly.

建议: 回答中表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多，且细节描述不够具体。建议用更准确的句子表达经历，并且注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot my good friend's birthday, which made me feel very sorry. So, I apologized to him and sent a special canvas gift to make up for it.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

示例: I use a daily To Do List to help me remember important things, such as completing my homework, remembering my family's birthdays, and buying things I need.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连贯的句子说明具体做法。

示例: I remember important things by making a daily To Do List. I usually write it either in the evening or in the morning to keep track of my tasks.

× I solo student there are many rules of law should we show that to remember?

✓ I am a solo student. There are many rules of law that we should remember.

这里'solo student'缺少冠词'a'，'rules'是复数，句子结构混乱，需拆分为两句，且'we should show that to remember'表达不清，改为'we should remember'更合适。

× And I now a graduate student so I think I am good at memory things.

✓ And I am now a graduate student, so I think I am good at memorizing things.

缺少动词'am'，'memory things'用词错误，应为动名词'memorizing things'。

× At one time I've got my good friends birthday.

✓ At one time, I forgot my good friend's birthday.

原句时态和表达错误，'I've got'不符合语境，应使用过去时'forgot'，且'good friends birthday'应为'good friend's birthday'表示所有格。

× but I got apologize to you, to him and I send a really canvas gift to him.

✓ but I apologized to him and sent a really nice canvas gift to him.

'got apologize'用法错误，应为过去式'apologized'，'to you'不合适，且动词时态需统一为过去时，'send'改为'sent'，'really canvas gift'缺少形容词，改为'really nice canvas gift'。

× I have my own daily To Do List.

✓ I have my own daily to-do list.

'To Do List'应为固定短语'to-do list'，且首字母不需大写。

× such as we should actually do the homework or my family's birthday or some. I want to buy. Things.

✓ such as doing homework, my family's birthday, or things I want to buy.

句子结构混乱，'we should actually do the homework'不符合上下文，应改为动名词短语，'some. I want to buy. Things.'断句错误，合并为'things I want to buy'。

× I have my own daily To Do List is my way to remember daily important things.

✓ My own daily to-do list is my way to remember important things every day.

句子结构错误，缺少连接词，改为主语+系动词结构，'daily important things'顺序调整为'important things every day'更自然。

× I will write it I took evening or at the morning one day.

✓ I write it in the evening or in the morning every day.

时态错误，'will write'和'took'混用不当，应统一为一般现在时，'I took evening'错误，改为'in the evening'，'at the morning'应为'in the morning'。