记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your method with supporting details.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially related to my studies. Whenever I see information multiple times, I tend to remember it automatically. Additionally, I find that studying alone and taking notes helps me retain information better.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using proper sentence structure and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to avoid short, incomplete sentences and add more specific details.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important recently. A few days ago, I had an important meeting with my preceptor at my placement, but I completely forgot about it and left after my shift. Later, she emailed me, and I felt very sad that I couldn't attend the meeting.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Make sure your sentences are complete and relevant.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, especially my grocery list. This is important because I often forget to buy some items. Also, when I cook, I remember the ingredients I need to prepare the dishes.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your method clearly. Provide specific details about how the app helps you remember important tasks.

示例: I usually use the iPhone reminders app to remember important things. I set reminders before the task needs to be done, which helps me stay organised. This way, the app notifies me at the right time, so I don't forget important activities.

× Yes, I'm very proficient in remembering things, especially that of my studies, because I.

✓ Yes, I'm very proficient in remembering things, especially those related to my studies, because I pay close attention.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Especially that of my studies' is incorrect; it should be 'especially those related to my studies' to refer to things. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'because I.' which is incomplete. The correction completes the sentence logically.

× Whenever I see a few times, I remember it automatically.

✓ Whenever I see something a few times, I remember it automatically.

The phrase 'see a few times' is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object like 'something' to make sense. The correction adds 'something' to clarify the meaning.

× And helps me too.

✓ It also helps me.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Alone and studied that way by taking notes.

✓ I study alone that way by taking notes.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject or verb. Adding 'I study' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Oh yes just recently few days back I had important meeting with my preceptor at my placement and I totally forgot and I left after my shift and then she emailed me and I was so.

✓ Oh yes, just a few days ago, I had an important meeting with my preceptor at my placement, and I totally forgot. I left after my shift, and then she emailed me, and I was so

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Adding commas and periods separates ideas clearly. 'Few days back' is better expressed as 'a few days ago'. The sentence ends abruptly, so it needs completion.

× Sad that I couldn't attend that meeting with her.

✓ sad that I couldn't attend that meeting with her.

This is a sentence fragment starting with a lowercase letter. It should be connected to the previous sentence or capitalized if standalone. Here, it is connected to the previous sentence in correction.

× I had important meeting with my preceptor at my placement

✓ I had an important meeting with my preceptor during my placement

The phrase 'at my placement' is less natural; 'during my placement' better expresses the time period. Also, 'important meeting' needs an article 'an' before it.

× just recently few days back

✓ just a few days ago

The phrase 'just recently few days back' is redundant and awkward. 'Just a few days ago' is the correct and natural expression.

× On daily basis I need to remember a few things like that.

✓ On a daily basis, I need to remember a few things like that.

The phrase 'On daily basis' is missing the article 'a'. It should be 'On a daily basis'.

× On daily basis I need to do like bringing up groceries and all, but particularly.

✓ On a daily basis, I need to do things like bringing groceries and so on, but particularly,

'Bringing up groceries' is incorrect; it should be 'bringing groceries'. Also, 'and all' is informal; 'and so on' is more appropriate. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× Grocery list is more important for me because I totally forgot forget about them.

✓ The grocery list is more important for me because I totally forget about the items.

'Grocery list' needs the definite article 'The'. 'Forgot forget' is incorrect; 'forget' is correct in present tense here. 'Them' is vague; 'the items' clarifies the meaning.

× And whenever I cook, I remember that I need.

✓ And whenever I cook, I remember what I need.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'what I need' completes the thought.

× Well, iPhone reminders app has made my life easier lately because I just set reminders prior to the.

✓ Well, the iPhone reminders app has made my life easier lately because I just set reminders prior to the task.

'iPhone' should be capitalized as 'iPhone'. The sentence ends abruptly after 'prior to the'; adding 'task' completes the sentence. Also, 'the' before 'iPhone' is needed.

× Thing at what time to be done so that I it helps me too, you know.

✓ thing at what time it needs to be done so that it helps me too, you know.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Adding 'it needs' clarifies the meaning. 'I it helps me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'.

× Click my mind whenever it's possible.

✓ It clicks in my mind whenever it's possible.

'Click my mind' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It clicks in my mind' meaning the idea comes to mind.