记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. However, I am trying to improve by practicing regularly and using memory techniques.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (forgot thay vì have forgot), và tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như "do important". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý để người nghe dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I left my house keys at home, so I had to wait for my mom to bring them to me, which delayed me from going out early.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cụ thể hơn về những việc bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, the materials I have to bring to class, and important dates like exams to stay organized.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những câu không liên quan. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually write notes to help me remember important things. Also, I sometimes ask my mom to remind me if I am worried I might forget.

× I am not good at memory things because As for me.

✓ I am not good at memorizing things because, for me,

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect; the correct form is 'memorizing things' as 'memorizing' is the verb form needed here. Also, 'As for me' should be 'for me' and separated properly with commas for clarity.

× Memory things helping my brain feel full and also memorizing things is really hard.

✓ Memorizing things makes my brain feel full, and also memorizing things is really hard.

'Memory things helping' is incorrect; it should be 'Memorizing things makes' to correctly express the action and effect. The verb 'helping' is not appropriate here without auxiliary verbs.

× So yes I am not good at memorizing thing and now I am trying to be better at memorizing.

✓ So yes, I am not good at memorizing things and now I am trying to be better at memorizing.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or concepts being memorized.

× I have forgot to a lot of things that do important.

✓ I have forgotten a lot of important things.

The correct past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten' when used with 'have'. Also, 'to a lot of things that do important' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of important things'.

× Like the one thing I'm gonna know is I'm forgotten my key at home, which is really important for me to get home early.

✓ Like one time I forgot my key at home, which was really important for me to get home early.

'I'm gonna know' is incorrect; it should be 'one time'. 'I'm forgotten' is incorrect; the past tense 'forgot' is appropriate here. Also, 'is' should be 'was' to match past tense.

× So I have to wait for my mom to come back and get me the key.

✓ So I had to wait for my mom to come back and get me the key.

Since the event happened in the past, 'have to' should be changed to past tense 'had to'.

× Well, I need to remember what I need to do and what things I need to bring in my class because I am not good at memorizing things and I make sure to remember that when do I have my exam and so on.

✓ Well, I need to remember what I need to do and what things I need to bring to my class because I am not good at memorizing things, and I make sure to remember when I have my exam and so on.

The preposition 'in' should be 'to' when referring to bringing things to a place. Also, the question word order 'when do I have my exam' is incorrect in a statement; it should be 'when I have my exam'.

× Or are usually give myself some notes and also to get also if I need to remember important things, I often ask my mom to remember it instead of three.

✓ I usually give myself some notes, and if I need to remember important things, I often ask my mom to remember them instead of me.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and structure. 'Or are' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually'. 'Ask my mom to remember it instead of three' is incorrect; 'them' refers to important things, and 'instead of me' is the correct phrase.

× And also important things really make myself more liberal than boring thing is so yeah.

✓ Also, important things really make me more interested than boring things, so yeah.

'Make myself more liberal' is incorrect; 'make me more interested' is appropriate. 'Boring thing is' should be 'boring things'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.