记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ dài dòng như "particularly important" và có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising numbers, especially because in accounting, remembering figures accurately is crucial. For instance, I often recall financial data from previous reports to complete my tasks efficiently.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "loaned it her computer to me" không chính xác. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể chia thành các câu ngắn hơn để rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my computer before a class presentation. Luckily, my best friend lent me hers, so I could present smoothly and received positive feedback from my teacher.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "take keep track" là không đúng. Câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp.

示例: I need to remember various things daily, like my routine, appointments, and deadlines. For example, I always keep track of my schedule to stay organized and avoid missing important tasks.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "more easier" là sai. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I usually use a digital calendar on my computer to organize my day more easily. In addition, I write down personal tasks on paper to ensure I don't forget anything important.

× I have recently forgotten my computer since I had a presentation in front of class, but fortunately my best friend loaned it her computer to me and eventually I had a good presentation without any trouble and received a good feedback from my highly qualified teacher.

✓ I have recently forgotten my computer since I had a presentation in front of class, but fortunately my best friend loaned her computer to me and eventually I had a good presentation without any trouble and received good feedback from my highly qualified teacher.

The phrase 'loaned it her computer to me' is incorrect because 'it' is an unnecessary pronoun here and causes confusion. The correct structure is 'loaned her computer to me'. Also, 'a good feedback' is incorrect because 'feedback' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'received good feedback'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I always try to take keep track of my timetable and important deadlines to stay organized well and to avoid forgetting anything important.

✓ I always try to keep track of my timetable and important deadlines to stay well organized and to avoid forgetting anything important.

The phrase 'take keep track' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep track'. Also, 'stay organized well' is awkward; the adverb 'well' should precede the adjective 'organized' as 'stay well organized'. These changes correct the prepositional and adverb placement errors.

× To be honest, I usually utilize a digital calendar on my computer which manages my day more easier and in addition, I also use paper to write down a list of personal activities that I need to fulfill on a daily basis.

✓ To be honest, I usually utilize a digital calendar on my computer which manages my day more easily and, in addition, I also use paper to write down a list of personal activities that I need to fulfill on a daily basis.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant. The correct adverb form is 'more easily'. Also, a comma is needed after 'in addition' to separate the introductory phrase. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and readability.