机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and clearer. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and incomplete sentences. Also, use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it has many functions. For example, it can wash different clothes such as skirts, dresses, and pants. Moreover, it is very easy to use, which saves me a lot of time.

建议: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Clarify your points with specific reasons and examples. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like 'flexible 1' which are unclear.

示例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they make tasks easier and faster. For instance, as a senior high school student, I find these machines convenient since they save me time, allowing me to focus on my studies.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to form complete sentences and use correct verb forms. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'.

示例: It depends on the machine. If I am using a machine for the first time or I have never seen it before, I always read the instructions carefully. However, if the machine is commonly used in my area, I usually do not read the instructions.

建议: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear opinion followed by specific reasons and examples.

示例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using a machine, especially if you are not familiar with it. However, if someone uses the machine regularly, they may not need to read the instructions every time.

× OK, I definitely washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because it's really that machine has so many function like to wash our umm, skirt, dress pants and so many.

✓ OK, I definitely think the washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because that machine has so many functions like washing our skirts, dresses, pants and many more.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'washing machine' needs a definite article 'the' and 'function' should be plural 'functions' because it refers to multiple uses. Also, 'skirt, dress pants' should be pluralized appropriately as 'skirts, dresses, pants' to match the context.

× OK, I definitely washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because it's really that machine has so many function like to wash our umm, skirt, dress pants and so many.

✓ OK, I definitely think the washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because that machine has so many functions like washing our skirts, dresses, pants and many more.

The phrase 'it's really that machine has' is incorrect pronoun usage and sentence structure. It should be rephrased to 'that machine has' to correctly refer to the washing machine without confusion.

× So it's really easy to use and also it's.

✓ So it's really easy to use as well.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and also it's.' It needs to be completed or rephrased to form a complete thought.

× Personally, yes, I think it's really important specifically for our daily life because we need to umm, do something easier and faster specifically for I as a Senior High School student.

✓ Personally, yes, I think it's really important specifically for our daily life because we need to do things easier and faster, especially for me as a Senior High School student.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used after 'specifically for'; it should be 'me' as the object of the preposition. Also, 'do something easier and faster' is awkward and should be 'do things easier and faster'.

× So I need to flexible 1 and I find it that machine very convenient and time saving.

✓ So I need to be flexible and I find that machine very convenient and time-saving.

'Flexible' is an adjective and needs the verb 'to be' before it. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective.

× I think it's depend on what the machine.

✓ I think it depends on the machine.

The verb 'depend' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× If the machine is I first time, uh, use that or I never have been said that machine before.

✓ If it is my first time using that machine or I have never used that machine before.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used; it should be 'my' to indicate possession. Also, 'never have been said' is incorrect; it should be 'have never used'.

× I of course read the instruction because I don't know how to use it, but if that machine is normally to use people in our area, I will.

✓ I of course read the instructions because I don't know how to use it, but if that machine is normally used by people in our area, I will not.

'Normally to use people' is incorrect; it should be 'normally used by people'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it usually refers to multiple steps.

× Yes, it's really important to read the instruction before we using the machine, but it's even on the people if the people use regularly.

✓ Yes, it's really important to read the instructions before we use the machine, but it depends on the people if they use it regularly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Before we using' is incorrect; it should be 'before we use'. 'It's even on the people' is unclear and should be 'it depends on the people'.

× So I think you don't need to see the instruction because you are familiar with that machine.

✓ So I think you don't need to read the instructions because you are familiar with that machine.

'See the instruction' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'read the instructions'.

× But if you never use or seen that one seat, of course you need to.

✓ But if you have never used or seen that one before, of course you need to.

The sentence is missing auxiliary verbs 'have' for present perfect tense. 'Seen' should be preceded by 'have'. 'One seat' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'one before' fits better.