机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，如“keeps clean”应为“keep clean”，且句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

示例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me keep the house clean easily and saves a lot of time. Moreover, it can reach places that are difficult to clean by hand, which makes it very convenient.

建议: 回答不完整且表达混乱，存在重复和语法错误。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免重复，清晰表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and make household chores more efficient.

建议: 回答表达了观点并给出例子，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“instruct.”应为“instructions”，句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法和用词准确性。

示例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to explore how it works by myself. For example, last week I tried a new coffee machine without reading the instructions, and it was quite fun.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“vacuum cleaner is”应为“vacuum cleaners are”，句子未结束。建议完整表达观点，注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

示例: Sometimes it is important to read the instructions. For simple machines like vacuum cleaners, it might not be necessary, but for complex devices such as a new mobile phone, reading the instructions can be very helpful.

× My favorite machine in my home is the vacuum cleaner, which can help me keeps clean easily and saves a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the vacuum cleaner, which can help me keep clean easily and saves a lot of time.

动词keep在这里应与主语me搭配，使用原形动词keep，而不是第三人称单数形式keeps。

× I think so because I think this machine could machines could help us save, help us save time and more and to be more efficient because we can, uh, put our.

✓ I think so because I think these machines could help us save time and be more efficient because we can, uh, put our.

machine和machines混用，导致单复数不一致，应统一为复数these machines。

× I don't usually read the instruct. Read the instruction before you see a machine because I prefer exploring how to use it by myself.

✓ I don't usually read the instructions before I use a machine because I prefer exploring how to use it by myself.

instruction应使用复数形式instructions，且句子中the instruct不完整，且before you see a machine表达不准确，应改为before I use a machine。

× Sometimes, because some simple machines such as vacuum cleaner is not very necessary to read it, but some complex machine such as a new mobile phone, you.

✓ Sometimes, because some simple machines such as vacuum cleaners do not require reading instructions, but some complex machines such as a new mobile phone do.

vacuum cleaner应为复数vacuum cleaners，machine应为复数machines，且谓语动词需与主语复数一致。