机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'and for' multiple times. Focus on giving clear reasons why you like the blender.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the blender because I use it to make protein shakes and to froth milk for my coffee. It is very useful and saves me a lot of time in the kitchen.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and try to form complete sentences. Also, avoid mixing singular and plural forms incorrectly.

示例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because nowadays, people are busy and do not have enough time to wash clothes or clean the house manually. Therefore, these machines make household chores more convenient and efficient.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repeating the word 'instruction' too many times. Try to explain the importance clearly and logically.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly. Otherwise, I might damage the machine or hurt myself.

建议: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your points. Also, be more specific about the problems that can happen if instructions are not read.

示例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they guide you on how to use the machine properly. If you ignore them, you might cause damage to the machine or face difficulties while operating it.

× I use it for blending my protein and for wiping up cream and for and for making coffee to making foam in coffee.

✓ I use it for blending my protein, for whipping cream, and for making foam in coffee.

The phrase 'wiping up cream' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'whipping' when referring to cream. Also, 'for and for making coffee to making foam in coffee' is redundant and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper gerund forms and clearer phrasing.

× Yes, they are important because in this world everybody don't have time so that he can wash their clothes.

✓ Yes, they are important because in this world, not everybody has time to wash their clothes.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and inconsistent pronoun use. 'Everybody' is singular and requires 'does not have' or 'has no' time, and 'he can wash their clothes' mixes singular and plural pronouns. The correction uses 'not everybody has time' and 'their clothes' for gender neutrality and agreement.

× And so it's washing machine and sweeping machine is convenient to wash clothes and for sweeping the house.

✓ And so washing machines and sweeping machines are convenient for washing clothes and sweeping the house.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms and verb agreement. 'It's washing machine and sweeping machine is' should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines are' to agree with the plural subject.

× Of course I read instruction before using a machine, because without reading instruction, how can I operate it?

✓ Of course I read the instructions before using a machine, because without reading the instructions, how can I operate it?

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to specific instructions for a machine.

× It is very necessary to read instruction because it will be a problem for machine as well As for you if you don't read instructions.

✓ It is very necessary to read the instructions because it will be a problem for the machine as well as for you if you don't read the instructions.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by 'the' when referring to specific instructions. Also, 'machine' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the particular machine.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction. After reading instruction you can operate machine.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions. After reading the instructions, you can operate the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by 'the' when referring to specific instructions. Similarly, 'machine' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the particular machine.

× Without reading instruction there will be a trouble in machine.

✓ Without reading the instructions, there will be trouble with the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by 'the'. Also, 'a trouble' is incorrect; 'trouble' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'In machine' should be 'with the machine' for correct preposition and article use.

× Maybe it was a big or a small.

✓ Maybe it will be a big or a small problem.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the noun 'problem' after 'big or small'. Also, 'was' should be 'will be' to match the future context. The article 'a' is correctly used before 'big' and 'small' when followed by a noun.

× So always read instruction before using a machine.

✓ So always read the instructions before using a machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to specific instructions.