机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes easily and saves a lot of time. For example, I can use that time to read a book or relax.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子并避免重复，同时用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. Without them, I would have to wash clothes and clean the house manually, which is tiring and time-consuming.

建议: 回答中表达不清楚且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免使用模糊词汇，并注意语法正确。

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I rely on my past experience. If I have problems, I prefer to ask my friends for help instead of reading the manual.

建议: 回答内容较好，但句子较长且有些重复，建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意连接词的使用，使表达更自然。

示例: I think reading instructions is helpful because it shows the correct way to use a machine. However, I often ask my parents or search online for quick guidance instead.

× After all, they work, it helps me to wash my dirty clothes without difficulty fought by myself, and it also saves me a lot of time to do another things such as read a book.

✓ After all, they work, it helps me to wash my dirty clothes without difficulty by myself, and it also saves me a lot of time to do other things such as read a book.

句中“fought by myself”使用了错误的动词形式，应为“by myself”表示“自己”，而不是“fought”。此外，“another things”应改为“other things”，因为“another”用于单数名词，复数名词应使用“other”。

× After all, they work, it helps me to wash my dirty clothes without difficulty fought by myself, and it also saves me a lot of time to do another things such as read a book.

✓ After all, they work, it helps me to wash my dirty clothes without difficulty by myself, and it also saves me a lot of time to do other things such as read a book.

“another things”中“another”用于单数名词，复数名词应使用“other”，因此应改为“other things”。

× Without them, a must to wash my clothes by myself and it will waste a lot of time that I can have much time to do on other things.

✓ Without them, I must wash my clothes by myself and it will waste a lot of time that I could use to do other things.

“a must to wash”结构不正确，应使用“I must wash”表示“我必须洗衣服”。此外，“can have much time to do on other things”表达不自然，应改为“could use to do other things”。

× Without them, a must to wash my clothes by myself and it will waste a lot of time that I can have much time to do on other things.

✓ Without them, I must wash my clothes by myself and it will waste a lot of time that I could use to do other things.

句中缺少主语“I”，导致句子不完整，应补充主语。

× And there is a difficult work for me.

✓ And it is difficult work for me.

“there is a difficult work”中“work”是不可数名词，不应使用“a”，且此处应使用“it”作为主语。

× I don't like watch anything, it is difficult or anything.

✓ I don't like to watch anything; it is difficult or something.

“don't like watch”缺少不定式“to”，应为“don't like to watch”。“or anything”表达不清，应改为“or something”。

× I will ask my friends to touch me and rather than read the instructions.

✓ I will ask my friends to teach me rather than read the instructions.

“touch me”用词错误，应为“teach me”表示“教我”。

× Or I can just search information by my phone, it is more quickly.

✓ Or I can just search for information on my phone; it is quicker.

“search information”应为“search for information”，“by my phone”应为“on my phone”，“more quickly”应为比较级“quicker”。