机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'keep our rooms very clean and cold' no imi ga sukoshi fumei desu. 'Clean' wa air conditioner ni wa amari tsukawanai kotoba desu. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, 2-3 bunshou de yori kantan ni shite kudasai.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool and comfortable during the hot summer months. It effectively lowers the room temperature and improves air quality, making the environment pleasant to live in.

建议: 'Watching machines' wa 'washing machines' no machigai desu. Eigo no hatsuon to bunpou ni chuuimashou. Soshite, 'work at other choices' wa fumei desu. Motto wakariyasui kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, 'Besides' no tsukaikata wa yoi desu ga, motto rikai shi yasui setsumei ga hitsuyou desu.

示例: I think washing machines are very important because they save us time by doing laundry automatically, allowing us to focus on other tasks. However, sweeping machines are less essential since we can clean the floor manually without much trouble.

建议: 'Breeding manuals' wa 'reading manuals' no machigai desu. Bunshou ga chotto fumei de, 'for example, when I.' de owatte iru node, setsumei ga kanzen dewa arimasen. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shi, bunshou o kanzen ni shite kudasai.

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because manuals are often long and boring. Instead, I rely on my previous experience and try to understand how the machine works by looking at it.

建议: Bunshou ga fumei de, 'he the way using them is different' no imi ga wakarimasen. 'We need to read them and instruct' mo fumei desu. Motto seikaku na eigo de setsumei shi, bunshou o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai.

示例: I think it is important to read the instructions because some machines are complex and operate differently from others. Reading the manual helps us use the machine correctly and safely.

× My favorite machine in my home is air conditioner because it is the most important and essential machine to live comfortable during summer seasons.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the air conditioner because it is the most important and essential machine to live comfortably during the summer season.

The noun 'air conditioner' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. 'Comfortable' should be the adverb 'comfortably' to modify the verb 'live'. 'Summer seasons' should be singular 'summer season' as it generally refers to one period.

× It keep our rooms very clean and cold.

✓ It keeps our rooms very clean and cold.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'keeps' to agree in number.

× I think watching machines are very important because while they are working, we can work at other choices so that it makes us efficient working.

✓ I think washing machines are very important because while they are working, we can do other tasks so that it makes us work efficiently.

'Watching machines' is a typo; it should be 'washing machines'. 'Work at other choices' is incorrect; 'do other tasks' is more appropriate. 'Efficient working' should be 'work efficiently' to use the adverb form.

× Besides, sweeping machines are not very important because we can sweep by ourselves without it.

✓ Besides, sweeping machines are not very important because we can sweep by ourselves without them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'sweeping machines', so it should be 'them'.

× Firstly, I'm not very fond of breeding manuals because they can be quite long and boring.

✓ Firstly, I'm not very fond of reading manuals because they can be quite long and boring.

'Breeding manuals' is a typo; the correct phrase is 'reading manuals'.

× So I find it unnecessary to read the instructions, for example, when I.

✓ So I find it unnecessary to read the instructions, for example, when I use a machine.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'when I'. Adding 'use a machine' completes the thought.

× Although I said I don't read them because some machine is very complex and he the way using them is different from other machines.

✓ Although I said I don't read them because some machines are very complex and the way of using them is different from other machines.

'Some machine is' should be plural 'some machines are'. 'He the way using them' is incorrect; it should be 'the way of using them'.

× We need to read them and instruct.

✓ We need to read them and follow the instructions.

The verb 'instruct' is incorrectly used here; the correct phrase is 'follow the instructions'.