机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'make save my time' 대신 'save my time'으로 표현하고, 문장을 더 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요. 또한, 'laundry machine' 앞에 관사 'the'를 붙여 자연스럽게 만드세요.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because I enjoy doing laundry. It helps me save both time and money, making it very useful for me.

建议: 답변에 중복과 불필요한 말이 포함되어 있습니다. 'uh' 같은 말은 피하고, 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 만드세요. 또한, 'they are they can save' 부분은 문법적으로 틀렸으니 수정이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are important because people in Korea often have little time for housework, so these machines help save time and effort.

建议: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'I have a poor size'는 의미가 불분명하며, 'many machines is'는 주어-동사 일치 오류입니다. 문장을 명확하게 고치고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because the font is too small for me to read easily. Also, many machines are user-friendly, so I can figure out how to use them by myself.

建议: 부정문 뒤에 완전한 문장이 필요하며, 'it is easy to me'는 어색한 표현입니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 고치고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

示例: No, I don't think it is very important to read instructions because I can usually figure out how to use machines easily on my own.

× My favorite machine is laundry machine.

✓ My favorite machine is the laundry machine.

In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. 'Laundry machine' is a singular countable noun, so it needs the definite article 'the' here to specify the particular machine.

× I like to do housework especially laundry.

✓ I like doing housework, especially laundry.

After verbs like 'like', the gerund (-ing form) is commonly used to express general preferences. 'Like doing' sounds more natural than 'like to do' in this context.

× It can make save my time and money so it is useful for me.

✓ It can save my time and money, so it is useful for me.

The phrase 'make save' is incorrect. The correct verb phrase is 'can save'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× so they are they can save their time and money.

✓ so they can save their time and money.

The phrase 'they are they can' is redundant and incorrect. The correct structure is 'they can' to express ability.

× No, I usually don't read the the instructions.

✓ No, I usually don't read the instructions.

The definite article 'the' is repeated twice mistakenly. Only one 'the' is needed before 'instructions'.

× I have a poor size.

✓ I have poor eyesight.

'Poor size' is incorrect when referring to vision. The correct phrase is 'poor eyesight' to indicate difficulty seeing.

× and also many machines is user friendly so easily figuring out myself.

✓ and also many machines are user friendly, so I can easily figure things out myself.

'Many machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, the phrase 'so easily figuring out myself' is ungrammatical; it should be 'so I can easily figure things out myself'.

× I rarely read the instruction before using the machines,

✓ I rarely read the instructions before using the machines,

'Instruction' in this context is usually pluralized as 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× but I can easily figure out myself and it is easy to me.

✓ but I can easily figure things out myself and it is easy for me.

The verb 'figure out' requires an object, so 'things' is added. Also, the correct preposition is 'easy for me' not 'easy to me'.