机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use clearer sentences and correct grammar. For example, say "My favourite machine is the washing machine because it helps us a lot, especially in winter when washing clothes by hand is difficult."

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. For instance, during winter, washing clothes by hand is very hard, but the washing machine makes it much easier.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Focus on making your sentences clear and logical. For example, say "Yes, washing and sweeping machines are important because not everyone can wash clothes or sweep floors easily by hand."

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because many people find it difficult to wash clothes or clean floors manually. These machines make household chores easier and save time.

建议: Your answer is mostly clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence flow. For example, say "Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to avoid any risks."

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using any machine because it helps me use it safely and avoid accidents.

建议: Your answer is good but has minor errors and could be more concise. For example, say "Yes, I always read instructions carefully to operate machines safely and prevent damage or accidents."

示例: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions before using any machine. For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, reading the manual helps me avoid damaging it or causing accidents.

× It's washing machine because it really helped us in many things.

✓ It's the washing machine because it really helps us in many things.

The phrase 'washing machine' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the current relevance.

× We don't need to wash our clothes in winter because it's really hard to watch many clothes or even like heavy Ulan clothes but wasn't missing has helped us a lot.

✓ We don't need to wash our clothes in winter because it's really hard to wash many clothes, especially heavy woolen clothes, but the washing machine has helped us a lot.

The verb 'watch' is incorrect; it should be 'wash'. 'Ulan' is likely a misspelling of 'woolen'. The phrase 'wasn't missing has helped us a lot' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'the washing machine has helped us a lot.' Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity.

× Definitely they are because many in many house people don't even have their capability Washington to wash clothes or to sleep right.

✓ Definitely they are because many people in many houses don't even have the capability to wash clothes or to sweep right.

The phrase 'many in many house people' is incorrect; it should be 'many people in many houses'. 'Capability Washington' is incorrect; likely intended 'capability to wash'. 'Sleep right' should be 'sweep right' to refer to sweeping machines.

× So this sweeping machine wasn't missing has their own.

✓ So this sweeping machine is definitely necessary to have.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Wasn't missing has their own' is not proper English. The correction clarifies the intended meaning that the sweeping machine is necessary.

× Yes, of course, everyone, everyone does that because without reading the instruction nobody can use the machine.

✓ Yes, of course, everyone does that because without reading the instructions nobody can use the machine.

The repetition of 'everyone' is unnecessary. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× So absolutely I also go for the instruction first because no risk at all.

✓ So absolutely, I also read the instructions first because there is no risk at all.

'Go for the instruction' is incorrect; 'read the instructions' is appropriate. Also, 'instruction' should be plural. The phrase 'no risk at all' needs a subject and verb to be a complete sentence.

× For example, when I use a new kitchen appliances, reading the manual insurance, I don't damage it or put myself at a risk.

✓ For example, when I use new kitchen appliances, reading the manual ensures I don't damage them or put myself at risk.

'A new kitchen appliances' is incorrect; 'appliances' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Manual insurance' is incorrect; it should be 'manual ensures'. 'At a risk' should be 'at risk'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'appliances'.