机器— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
I think it must be my iPad. iPad has a large screen and powerful sound unit which really makes me accessible to the scene in my favorite movies and I think it is really helpful.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yes, in today's city's life, lifestyles are quick, so our family don't have a lot of time to do housework by our own. So washing machines and sweeping machines are really helpful.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
No, because today's machines are easy to use and I think I can seek the approach to use it by myself.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yes, sometimes it hears like air conditioners. We should read instructions to know how to control every mode in it and it is really good to know every detail of it.
评估
总分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“makes me accessible to the scene”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。
示例: My favourite machine at home is my iPad because it has a large screen and excellent sound quality, which makes watching my favourite movies very enjoyable and immersive.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“in today's city's life”表达重复且不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。
示例: Yes, in today's fast-paced city life, people often don't have enough time to do housework themselves, so washing machines and sweeping machines are very helpful.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中表达不够自然，“seek the approach to use it by myself”不符合英语习惯。建议用更简单直接的表达，并补充原因。
示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because modern machines are user-friendly, and I can figure out how to use them on my own.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“it hears like air conditioners”不清楚。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。
示例: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions, especially for devices like air conditioners, so that we can understand how to use all the different modes properly.
语法
× iPad has a large screen and powerful sound unit which really makes me accessible to the scene in my favorite movies and I think it is really helpful.
✓ The iPad has a large screen and a powerful sound unit which really makes me feel immersed in the scenes of my favorite movies, and I think it is really helpful.
这里缺少冠词“the”和“a”，iPad作为特指的设备前应加定冠词“the”，而“powerful sound unit”前应加不定冠词“a”。此外，表达“makes me accessible to the scene”不自然，改为“makes me feel immersed in the scenes”更符合英语表达习惯。
× Yes, in today's city's life, lifestyles are quick, so our family don't have a lot of time to do housework by our own.
✓ Yes, in today's city life, lifestyles are fast, so our family doesn't have a lot of time to do housework on our own.
“city's life”应为“city life”，表示城市生活；“lifestyles are quick”应改为“lifestyles are fast”，形容生活节奏快；“our family don't”主谓不一致，family作为单数应用doesn't；“by our own”应为“on our own”，固定搭配。
× No, because today's machines are easy to use and I think I can seek the approach to use it by myself.
✓ No, because today's machines are easy to use and I think I can figure out how to use it by myself.
“seek the approach to use it”表达不自然，英语中常用“figure out how to use it”表示“自己弄明白怎么用”。
× Yes, sometimes it hears like air conditioners.
✓ Yes, sometimes it sounds like air conditioners.
“it hears like”不正确，应为“it sounds like”，表示“听起来像”。
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