机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时句子结构不完整，存在语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句错误，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

示例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it cleans clothes effectively and saves my hands from harsh detergents.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“swapping machines”应为“sweeping machines”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法准确性，使用正确词汇，并注意句子连贯。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines clean clothes more effectively than doing it by hand, and sweeping machines make it easier to clean floors, especially in larger houses.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但“between using machine”用词不当，且句子稍显冗长。建议使用更准确的短语，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they help me operate it correctly and protect it from damage.

建议: 回答较为完整，但“in a scientific way”表达不够自然，建议使用更贴切的表达方式，并注意句子简洁。

示例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because they explain how to use the machine properly and ensure it functions well.

× My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps. Cleaning the clothes effectively and it relax our hands from detergent.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps clean the clothes effectively and it relaxes our hands from detergent.

原句中“helps. Cleaning”断句错误，导致句子结构不完整，应将“helps”与“cleaning”连成一个完整的谓语结构，且“relax”应与主语“it”保持单数第三人称一致，改为“relaxes”。

× Washing machine can clean the clothes more effectively than people do it, and swapping machines is more easier to clean the floor for the the house that's bigger.

✓ Washing machines can clean clothes more effectively than people do, and sweeping machines are easier to clean the floor in bigger houses.

“Washing machine”应为复数形式“Washing machines”以匹配泛指，且“do it”中“it”多余，应去掉；“swapping machines”应为“sweeping machines”；“is more easier”中“more”多余，应去掉；“for the the house that's bigger”表达不自然，应改为“in bigger houses”。

× I have the habit of reading instructions between using machine because I think instructions can help us using machines in a more scientific way which can protect the machine.

✓ I have the habit of reading instructions before using machines because I think instructions can help us use machines in a more scientific way which can protect the machine.

“between using machine”中“between”用法错误，应改为“before”；“using machines”作为宾语时应使用动词原形“use”而非动名词“using”。

× Washing machine can clean the clothes more effectively than people do it, and swapping machines is more easier to clean the floor for the the house that's bigger.

✓ Washing machines can clean clothes more effectively than people do, and sweeping machines are easier to clean the floor in bigger houses.

“the clothes”中的定冠词“the”不必要，泛指时应去掉；“the the house”重复，应去掉一个“the”；“bigger”应与复数名词“houses”搭配。

× it relax our hands from detergent.

✓ it relaxes our hands from detergent.

主语“it”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“relaxes”。