机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the Kent Automatic Vegetable Cutter and Blender. It helps me cut vegetables and blend ingredients quickly, which saves a lot of time while cooking. Because of this, I can prepare meals faster and more efficiently.

建议: Focus on clarity and coherence by correcting vocabulary mistakes and using linking words. Avoid filler words and provide specific reasons to support your answer.

示例: I am not very familiar with sweeping machines, but washing machines are definitely important nowadays. Since both men and women work, washing machines save a lot of time and effort. Therefore, they are very helpful in modern households.

建议: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more concise and clear in your explanation.

示例: I usually don't like reading instructions thoroughly. Instead, I watch YouTube videos that explain how to use the machine, which I find easier to understand. However, I do refer to the instruction manual occasionally.

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific in your explanation.

示例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions when you get a new machine. Otherwise, you might use it incorrectly, which can cause damage or make it stop working properly.

× Recently I purchased a Kent Vegetable Automatic Vegetable Cutter and Blender which is a favorite machine for me nowadays because it helps me cutting veggies or blending something in seconds which make helps me to make food quick.

✓ Recently I purchased a Kent Vegetable Automatic Vegetable Cutter and Blender which is a favorite machine for me nowadays because it helps me cut veggies or blend something in seconds which helps me to make food quickly.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So 'helps me cutting' should be 'helps me cut'. Also, 'make helps me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. Additionally, 'quick' is an adjective but here an adverb is needed, so 'quickly' is correct.

× I'm not much known about sleeping machine, but washing machines are definitely a revolution for current modern generation because when couples are working, females are also working in cur current era.

✓ I'm not much familiar with sweeping machines, but washing machines are definitely a revolution for the current modern generation because when couples are working, females are also working in the current era.

The phrase 'not much known about' is incorrect; 'not much familiar with' is appropriate. Also, 'sleeping machine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine'. The article 'the' is needed before 'current modern generation' and 'current era' for specificity.

× So washing machines, uh, giving quick benefits and helping, uh.

✓ So washing machines give quick benefits and help.

The sentence lacks a proper verb form; 'giving' and 'helping' need auxiliary verbs or should be changed to simple present tense verbs to agree with the subject 'washing machines'. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× I'm not much fond of reading, so I don't read thoroughly the instructions, but definitely I try to find some YouTube uh, videos who can help me to learn about the machine and it is also easily uh, understandable.

✓ I'm not very fond of reading, so I don't read the instructions thoroughly, but I definitely try to find some YouTube videos that can help me learn about the machine and are also easily understandable.

The adverb 'thoroughly' should come after the object 'instructions'. 'Not much fond' is incorrect; 'not very fond' is correct. 'Who' should be 'that' when referring to videos. Also, 'help me to learn' can be simplified to 'help me learn'. Unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be removed.

× Yes, if you're not aware about any machine, something new is coming to your home.

✓ Yes, if you're not aware of any machine or if something new is coming to your home.

The correct preposition with 'aware' is 'of', not 'about'. The sentence is also clearer if rephrased to connect the two ideas properly.

× So reading instructions are very important because if we will not read the instructions we can do something wrong to that machine which can lead to non working or damage to work on that machine.

✓ So reading instructions is very important because if we do not read the instructions, we can do something wrong to that machine which can lead to it not working or getting damaged.

'Reading instructions' is singular, so 'is' is correct. The conditional sentence should use present tense 'do not read' instead of 'will not read' after 'if'. 'Non working' is incorrect; 'not working' is correct. 'Damage to work on that machine' is unclear; 'getting damaged' is clearer.