机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine. I often stay up late, so I need a strong coffee the next morning to give me more energy.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并提供具体原因。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. Washing machines help remove dust and bacteria from our clothes, which keeps us healthy. Sweeping machines protect the floor surface and keep our home clean.

建议: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误，句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法，使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I want to follow the correct procedures. This helps me avoid damaging the machine on the first day.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议补充完整观点，使用连接词，并提供具体例子。

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it helps me use the machine correctly. Also, it allows me to handle tricky situations and find useful tips.

× Coffee machine I think I can't stand the life which without my coffee machine in my home I often stay up late so I need a strong coffee next morning for me to give me more energy for the.

✓ Coffee machine. I think I can't stand life without my coffee machine at home. I often stay up late, so I need a strong coffee the next morning to give me more energy.

句子中缺少冠词，且复数和单数使用不当。'life which without my coffee machine'应改为'life without my coffee machine'，去掉多余的关系代词。'next morning for me to give me more energy for the'结构不完整，改为'the next morning to give me more energy'更通顺。建议注意冠词的使用和句子结构的完整性。

× Washing machine is a really useful way to avoid some dust and bacteria which can lead to some disease on our body and sweep it can protect its surface and we can prevent our.

✓ Washing machines are a really useful way to avoid dust and bacteria which can lead to diseases in our body, and sweeping can protect surfaces and help us prevent illness.

'Washing machine'应为复数'washing machines'，因为泛指多台洗衣机。'some disease'应为复数'diseases'。'sweep it can protect its surface'表达不清，改为'sweeping can protect surfaces'更准确。句子末尾不完整，补充完整。建议注意单复数一致和句子完整性。

× It is essential for me to read the instructions previously 'cause I want to follow the right procedure to use my new machine.

✓ It is essential for me to read the instructions beforehand because I want to follow the correct procedure to use my new machine.

'previously'用法不当，改为'beforehand'更合适。'cause'应为完整形式'because'。'right procedure'改为'correct procedure'更正式。建议注意介词和副词的正确使用。

× I don't want a result of broke my new machine in the first day to use it.

✓ I don't want to end up breaking my new machine on the first day of using it.

'a result of broke'结构错误，应使用动名词形式'breaking'。'in the first day to use it'应改为'on the first day of using it'。建议注意动词形式和时间介词的正确使用。

× Yes, it is essential I can use the instructions to do some correct procedure to use the machine.

✓ Yes, it is essential. I can use the instructions to follow the correct procedures to use the machine.

'some correct procedure'应为复数'correct procedures'，因为通常有多个步骤。句子缺少标点，建议分句。建议注意单复数和标点使用。

× And by the way, I can through this way to deal with some tricky things and maybe I can find some.

✓ And by the way, I can use this method to deal with some tricky things, and maybe I can find some solutions.

'I can through this way'结构错误，应改为'I can use this method'。句子末尾不完整，补充完整。建议注意介词和句子完整性。