机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。可以用更丰富的词汇描述机器的重要性和作用。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer months. It makes my living environment much more comfortable and bearable.

建议: 回答中断断续续，表达不连贯，且有语法错误。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

示例: I believe washing machines are more important because they save a lot of time and effort when cleaning clothes. Although sweeping machines can be helpful, they are not as essential as washing machines.

建议: 回答中有较多语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine. This helps me understand how to operate it correctly and avoid any mistakes.

建议: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议加强句子结构练习，避免语法错误，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

示例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important when using a machine for the first time. However, if I am familiar with the machine, I may not need to read the instructions again.

× It's make me more comfortable when I stay home.

✓ It makes me more comfortable when I stay home.

主语是第三人称单数"It"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是原形"make"。

× when your washing machine, when you're washing your clothes or desks through machines is, uh, can uh, free your labor in home.

✓ when your washing machine, when you're washing your clothes or desks through machines, it can free your labor at home.

句子中主语是"washing machine"，为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用"it can"，而不是省略主语直接用"is, uh, can"。另外，介词"in home"应改为"at home"。

× sweeping machines is not, I think.

✓ sweeping machines are not, I think.

"sweeping machines"为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"，而不是单数"is"。

× I read the instruction and the guidelines, uh, about the machine, how to use this machine.

✓ I read the instructions and the guidelines about the machine, how to use this machine.

"instruction"应使用复数形式"instructions"，因为通常说明书是复数形式。

× I can, it's OK, Ignore the interactions instructions.

✓ I can, it's OK, ignore the instructions.

"interactions instructions"是错误搭配，应为"instructions"，且"Ignore"不应大写。