机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免使用口语填充词如“well”，并且句子结构可以更完整自然。可以增加一些具体细节来丰富答案，比如为什么喜欢空调。

示例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool and comfortable during the hot summer months.

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important for big families because they save a lot of time. However, since I live alone, I don't find them necessary.

建议: 回答中有过多的口语填充词，影响流畅度。建议减少重复和填充词，使用更简洁的句子表达观点。

示例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine. But if I encounter any problems, I read the manual or contact customer service to solve the issue quickly.

建议: 回答不完整且句子结构不完整。建议完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Nowadays, I don't think it's necessary to read the instructions before using a machine because customer service often provides tutorial videos that are easier to follow.

× Well, recently my favorite machine is definitely air conditioner, something we can't live without in hot summer.

✓ Well, recently my favorite machine is definitely the air conditioner, something we can't live without in the hot summer.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指家中的空调。名词前需要加定冠词以明确指代。

× It depends, they're important for some big families some.

✓ It depends, they're important for some big families.

句子中多余的“some”导致语法错误，应删除。

× Some people need to spend a lot of time watching balls after finishing a dinner for 4/4 families members.

✓ Some people need to spend a lot of time watching children after finishing dinner for 4 family members.

“balls”应为“children”或“kids”，且“families members”应为“family members”，单复数错误。

× But for me I live alone so I don't need them.

✓ But for me, I live alone so I don't need them.

此句无明显单复数错误，但加逗号更符合书面表达。

× Uh, usually I don't do that while using the machines.

✓ Uh, usually I don't do that when using the machines.

“while”用法不当，表示“当……时”应使用“when”。

× Uh, if I found some trouble, umm, using it, I will uh, uh, read the instructions, find an answer in the instructions at that time or just ask the customer services.

✓ Uh, if I find some trouble using it, I will read the instructions, find an answer in the instructions at that time or just ask customer service.

“found”应为现在时“find”，且“customer services”应为不可数名词“customer service”。

× It's more quick way to solve the problem.

✓ It's a quicker way to solve the problem.

“more quick”应改为比较级“quicker”，且缺少冠词“a”。

× Nowadays I think it's not something necessary reading the instructions before using it, because normally when we buy something online, the customer services will send us the video, the tutorials in video forms which.

✓ Nowadays I think it's not necessary to read the instructions before using it, because normally when we buy something online, customer service will send us videos or tutorials in video form.

“something necessary reading”结构错误，应为“necessary to read”；“customer services”应为“customer service”；“the video, the tutorials in video forms which”表达不完整且冗余，应简化。