机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'mission' er bodole 'machine' bola uchit. Sentence gulo aro natural korte hobe, ebong kichu linking words use kore answer ke coherent korte hobe. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, tai answer ke concise rakhte hobe.

示例: My favourite machine at home is my computer. I use it every day, starting from the morning when I wake up. First, I check my emails and messages on social media. Then, I use it throughout the day for work and entertainment.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu language mistakes ache, jemon 'you need to Washington' bujhte parchi na. Apni clear and specific details dite paren, ebong linking words use kore answer ke logical korte paren.

示例: In my opinion, washing machines are very useful because washing clothes by hand is hard work. Moreover, they save a lot of time and effort. Sweeping machines are also important as they help keep the house clean easily.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'instruction' er bodole 'instructions' bola uchit. Apni aro kichu linking words add korte paren jate answer ta aro fluent hoy.

示例: Yes, I often read the instructions in the machine box because they guide me on how to open the package and set up everything correctly. Therefore, I think reading instructions is necessary for everyone.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistakes ache, jemon 'instruction' er bodole 'instructions' bola uchit. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro clear and logical korte paren. Sentence gulo ke complete korte hobe.

示例: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because if you open the machine incorrectly, it might get damaged. On the other hand, by following the step-by-step instructions, you can set it up properly and avoid problems.

× My favorite mission in home is my computer.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my computer.

The word 'mission' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'machine'. Also, 'in home' should be 'in my home' to specify possession and location properly.

× I use it every day from the start of the morning I woke up and open my computer, check my emails and messages from the other social sites and the whole day I going through.

✓ I use it every day; from the moment I wake up in the morning, I open my computer, check my emails and messages from other social sites, and spend the whole day using it.

The sentence mixes past tense 'woke up' with present tense 'use' and 'open'. To maintain consistency, present tense should be used for habitual actions. Also, 'the other social sites' should be 'other social sites', and 'I going through' is incorrect; it should be 'spend the whole day using it' or similar.

× In my point of view, washing machines are quite useful because when you want to wash your clothes with your hands, it's so heavy work and you need to Washington.

✓ In my point of view, washing machines are quite useful because when you want to wash your clothes by hand, it's very hard work and you need to use a washing machine.

The phrase 'with your hands' is better expressed as 'by hand'. The phrase 'you need to Washington' is incorrect and likely a typo; it should be 'you need to use a washing machine' or similar.

× Yes, I often read the instruction in the machine box.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions in the machine box.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× It helps me to guide how to open the package and set up everything in the right way.

✓ It helps guide me on how to open the package and set up everything in the right way.

The phrase 'helps me to guide' is incorrect; it should be 'helps guide me'. Also, 'how to open' is better preceded by 'on' as 'guide me on how to open'.

× Yes, it's really important to read the instruction because if you open it in a wrong way, the function could be disabled.

✓ Yes, it's really important to read the instructions because if you open it in the wrong way, the function could be disabled.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'in a wrong way' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the wrong way'.

× On the other hand, if you want to set up in a proper way, you must read the instruction which is written step by step, so.

✓ On the other hand, if you want to set it up properly, you must read the instructions which are written step by step.

The phrase 'set up in a proper way' is better expressed as 'set it up properly'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'which is written' should be 'which are written' to agree with plural 'instructions'. The sentence ending with 'so' is incomplete and should be omitted.