机器— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My favorite mission is washing machine in my home and because it helps me control my time, save my time when I don't have time for washing my pot or dishes and that's why I think that it will be very good.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
What is Mr. Weeping?
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Yes, I read when I construct my home machines. For example, last year I bought a washing machines. Firstly I read it, then I use the machines. And I think that when we did like this, at the same time we learned about.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yes, uh, I always think it's important because, uh, they consist of our, uh, essential databases. And when we, for example, uh, I don't remember whether it was in the past when my father vowed a sleeping machine, he didn't.
评估
总分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分数: 60.0建议: Cavabınızda bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi səhvləri var. Məsələn, "mission" əvəzinə "machine" istifadə edilməlidir. Cümlələr daha təbii və qısa olmalıdır. Daha aydın və səlis ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələri 3-4 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşdırın.
示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. When I am busy, it helps me clean my clothes quickly. Therefore, I find it very useful.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分数: 10.0建议: Sualı başa düşmədiyiniz zaman, bunu nəzakətlə ifadə edin və ya sualı təkrar soruşun. Bu, söhbətin davam etməsinə kömək edir. Məsələn, "Could you please repeat the question?" deyə bilərsiniz.
示例: I'm sorry, could you please repeat the question? I didn't understand what you meant by 'sweeping machines'.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分数: 55.0建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və söz sırası problemləri var. Daha sadə və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, "I read the instructions before using a machine" kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi ardıcıl şəkildə ifadə edin.
示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine. For example, when I bought a washing machine last year, I read the manual carefully before using it. This helped me understand how to operate it properly.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分数: 40.0建议: Cavabınızda çoxlu durğunluqlar və qeyri-dəqiq ifadələr var. Daha aydın və konkret cavablar verməyə çalışın. Məsələn, "Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because they help us use machines safely and effectively." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin.
示例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they provide essential information on how to use the machine safely and correctly. Without reading them, we might damage the machine or hurt ourselves.
语法
× My favorite mission is washing machine in my home and because it helps me control my time, save my time when I don't have time for washing my pot or dishes and that's why I think that it will be very good.
✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it helps me save time when I don't have time to wash my pots or dishes, and that's why I think it is very good.
The word 'mission' is incorrect; it should be 'machine' (singular). Also, 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. 'Pot' should be plural 'pots' to match the context. The phrase 'save my time' is better as 'save time' for natural English usage.
× Yes, I read when I construct my home machines. For example, last year I bought a washing machines. Firstly I read it, then I use the machines. And I think that when we did like this, at the same time we learned about.
✓ Yes, I read the instructions when I set up my home machines. For example, last year I bought a washing machine. First, I read it, then I used the machine. And I think that when we do this, we learn at the same time.
The phrase 'bought a washing machines' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'a washing machine' (singular). 'Use the machines' should be singular 'used the machine' to match the singular subject. 'Did like this' is better as 'do this' to express habitual action. Also, 'construct my home machines' is unnatural; 'set up my home machines' is more appropriate.
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