机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“I are”应为“I am”，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意主谓一致，并且回答可以更完整，增加细节说明为什么喜欢这台机器。

示例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because it helps me with my studies and allows me to access information quickly.

建议: 回答中语法和表达混乱，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明这些机器的重要性。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and make house cleaning easier and more efficient.

建议: 回答中有重复和用词错误，如“raise the instruction”应为“read the instructions”，影响表达清晰度。建议注意用词准确，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine so that I understand the functions of the buttons and avoid using it incorrectly.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，注意语法结构，并具体说明阅读说明书的重要性。

示例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it teaches us how to use the machine properly and prevents mistakes or damage.

× Ah, of course I will choose my laptop. It is really useful when I are in my study.

✓ Ah, of course I will choose my laptop. It is really useful when I am in my study.

句子中主语是第一人称单数“I”，谓语动词应使用“am”而不是“are”，这是主谓一致错误。

× Of course, in I used to refill except washing machines and sewing machines, but when I already got to the two machines, I think it is really convenient and release us from the pressure of the house cleaning.

✓ Of course, I used to rely on washing machines and sewing machines, but now that I have both machines, I think they are really convenient and relieve us from the pressure of house cleaning.

句中“in I used to refill except”结构不正确，应该是“used to rely on”；“already got to the two machines”表达不清，应改为“now that I have both machines”；“release us”应为“relieve us”，表示减轻压力。整体是介词和词汇使用错误。

× Oh yes, I do. It is really important to raise the instruction before using the machine so that you know what's the meaning of the different buttons and to avoid the avoid the this appropriate actions.

✓ Oh yes, I do. It is really important to read the instructions before using the machine so that you know the meaning of the different buttons and to avoid inappropriate actions.

“raise the instruction”用词错误，应为“read the instructions”；“avoid the avoid the this appropriate actions”重复且用词错误，应为“avoid inappropriate actions”。这是介词和词汇使用错误。

× Yes, I think they it is really important the instructions of your telling us how to use a machine properly and to avoid such. To avoid the behaviors.

✓ Yes, I think it is really important to read the instructions because they tell us how to use a machine properly and avoid such behaviors.

句中“they it is really important the instructions of your telling us”结构混乱，代词使用错误，应明确主语和宾语关系，改为“it is really important to read the instructions because they tell us...”。这是代词使用错误。