机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer should be more natural and complete. Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Also, provide clear reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and helps me keep my clothes clean, which makes me feel confident.

建议: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding incomplete sentences. Also, try to be more specific in your explanations.

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us time and help keep our homes clean. For example, when guests visit, a clean house makes a good impression, and clean clothes help us feel confident.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is expensive or belongs to my office. This way, I can be sure to use it correctly and avoid any damage.

建议: Your answer needs to be more complete and natural. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

示例: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because it helps prevent damage to new machines. Moreover, since machines are expensive nowadays, following the instructions ensures you use them correctly and confidently.

× Clothes The washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because it makes me feel confident and it it reduces my time and I always.

✓ The washing machine is my favorite machine in my home because it makes me feel confident, reduces my time, and I always use it.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error with the word 'Clothes' misplaced and repeated 'it'. The sentence is also fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions. Correcting the sentence structure and removing unnecessary words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× They help us save our time. They help us make our new home and ourselves always clean and feel confident because when guests come, the house is clean and when you go somewhere you are clean and presentable and.

✓ They help us save our time. They help us keep our new home and ourselves always clean and feel confident because when guests come, the house is clean, and when you go somewhere, you are clean and presentable.

The original sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' and has awkward phrasing 'make our new home and ourselves always clean'. Replacing 'make' with 'keep' and removing the trailing 'and' corrects the sentence. Proper punctuation also improves readability.

× Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine, especially when it's much expensive and especially when the machine belongs not to me, but to my management, to my office, and I need to be sure I do everything.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine, especially when it's very expensive and especially when the machine does not belong to me, but to my management or my office, and I need to be sure I do everything correctly.

The phrase 'much expensive' is incorrect; 'very expensive' is the correct form. Also, 'belongs not to me' is awkward; 'does not belong to me' is correct. Using 'or' instead of repeating 'to' before 'my office' improves the sentence. Adding 'correctly' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I think it's absolutely important to read the instructions to avoid damage the newly purchased machine and to be to feel free. You are doing everything right 'cause the machines nowadays are very expensive and it would be.

✓ Yes, I think it's absolutely important to read the instructions to avoid damaging the newly purchased machine and to feel confident that you are doing everything right because machines nowadays are very expensive, and it would be costly if damaged.

The phrase 'to avoid damage the' is incorrect; it should be 'to avoid damaging'. 'To be to feel free' is awkward and unclear; 'to feel confident' is better. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it would be.' Completing the thought clarifies the meaning. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate here.