机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it improves the efficiency of washing clothes and saves water. Therefore, it is environmentally friendly, and I can spend more time doing other activities.

建议: Your response is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and could be more coherent. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve flow. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help busy people reduce their workload. For instance, they can start the machines before leaving for work and come back to a clean house.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid phrases like 'familiarize myself blindly' which are confusing. Instead, clearly explain your habits regarding reading instructions, using correct grammar and linking words.

示例: Sometimes I read the instructions if the machine is new to me. However, if I have used the same model before, I usually do not read the manual because I am already familiar with it.

建议: Your answer shows understanding but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

示例: Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions helps save time when using machines. Moreover, by familiarising myself with the appliances through the manual, I can avoid making mistakes.

× I would say the washing machine would be my favorite appliance at home becauses it's not only improve the efficiency of washing clothes, it also safe water.

✓ I would say the washing machine would be my favorite appliance at home because it not only improves the efficiency of washing clothes, it also saves water.

The verbs 'improve' and 'safe' are incorrectly used here. After 'not only', the verb should be in the third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'safe' is an adjective, but the verb 'save' is needed here in third person singular form 'saves'. Additionally, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'.

× With this it's environmental friendly and also I can spend more time on doing other stuff.

✓ With this, it's environmentally friendly and also I can spend more time doing other stuff.

The phrase 'environmental friendly' should be 'environmentally friendly' because 'friendly' is an adjective modified by an adverb. Also, 'spend more time on doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'spend more time doing' without 'on'.

× I think they're important as it's really help those who are busy working to reduce their workload and keep their house clean.

✓ I think they're important as they really help those who are busy working to reduce their workload and keep their house clean.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because it refers to a singular subject, but 'they' (washing machines and sweeping machines) is plural. Also, 'help' should be in base form after 'really' with plural subject 'they'.

× They can just leave it when they go to work and they will have a clean house after.

✓ They can just leave them when they go to work and they will have a clean house after.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural machines, so it should be 'them' to agree in number with the plural antecedent.

× Sometimes I do read the instruction if the machines are new to me, but if I have a machine that I have already used to have before, example same model of washing machines, then I will familiarize myself blindly.

✓ Sometimes I do read the instructions if the machines are new to me, but if I have a machine that I have already used before, for example the same model of washing machine, then I will familiarize myself blindly.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'used to have before' is redundant; 'used before' suffices. 'Example' should be 'for example' and 'washing machines' should be singular 'washing machine' to match 'same model'.

× Sometimes I do read the instruction if the machines are new to me, but if I have a machine that I have already used to have before, example same model of washing machines, then I will familiarize myself blindly.

✓ Sometimes I do read the instructions if the machines are new to me, but if I have a machine that I have already used before, for example the same model of washing machine, then I will familiarize myself blindly.

The phrase 'familiarize myself blindly' is awkward; 'familiarize myself without reading' or 'use it without reading' would be clearer. However, as per instructions, only grammar issues are corrected here.

× Yes definitely it will help with reducing much more time in trying to use the machines.

✓ Yes, definitely it will help reduce much more time trying to use the machines.

The phrase 'help with reducing' is incorrect; 'help reduce' is the correct form. Also, 'in trying' should be 'trying' without 'in'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Other than that by familiarize myself with the machines and appliances by reading the manual, it will reduce the mistakes all.

✓ Other than that, by familiarizing myself with the machines and appliances by reading the manual, I will reduce all the mistakes.

'By familiarize' should be 'by familiarizing' (gerund form). The pronoun 'it' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I' as the person reducing mistakes. 'Mistakes all' is incorrect word order; 'all the mistakes' is correct.