机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use correct forms like 'comfortable' instead of 'comfort table' and avoid redundancy such as 'when the weather is gets cold'. Also, use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay comfortable during hot days by providing cool air. Additionally, when the weather gets cold, I can adjust the temperature to warm up the room, which is very convenient. So, it makes my living space much more pleasant throughout the year.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences, which affects coherence. Avoid repetition like 'washing machine using washing machine' and ensure your supporting details are specific and complete. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' properly to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households because they save a lot of time and effort compared to manual cleaning. For example, a washing machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly and quickly, which is very helpful for busy people.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'didn't don't know' and 'according to 8'. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid confusing expressions. Also, use linking words like 'so' to explain reasons clearly.

示例: Yes, whenever I buy a new machine that I don't know how to use, I usually read the instructions provided by the company in the manual booklet. I follow these instructions carefully so that I can use the machine conveniently and efficiently.

建议: Your answer conveys your opinion but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing such as 'becaused' and 'making it complicated to ourself'. Try to use correct conjunctions and pronouns, and structure your sentences clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

示例: In my opinion, it is important to read the instructions because using a machine without knowing how can make things complicated for ourselves. Therefore, reading the instructions helps us use the machine more efficiently and safely.

× My favorite machine at home is air conditioner because it helps me to stay comfort table during hot days by providing cool air.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me to stay comfortable during hot days by providing cool air.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe a state of comfort. Also, 'air conditioner' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific machine in the home.

× My favorite machine at home is air conditioner because it helps me to stay comfort table during hot days by providing cool air.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me to stay comfortable during hot days by providing cool air.

The noun 'air conditioner' is a specific item in the home, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× Moreover, when the weather is gets cold, I can easily adjust the temperature to warm up the room, which is very convenient.

✓ Moreover, when the weather gets cold, I can easily adjust the temperature to warm up the room, which is very convenient.

The phrase 'is gets cold' is incorrect; 'gets cold' is the correct present tense form to describe the weather changing.

× For example, washing machine using washing machine. Machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly and hide.

✓ For example, using a washing machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly and properly.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence. 'Hide' is incorrect here; 'properly' or 'thoroughly' fits better.

× Yes, whenever I buy a new type of machine which I didn't don't know how to use, are usually read instructions given by company in a manual booklet.

✓ Yes, whenever I buy a new type of machine which I don't know how to use, I usually read the instructions given by the company in a manual booklet.

The phrase 'didn't don't' is incorrect; it should be 'don't'. Also, the subject 'I' was missing before 'usually read'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'instructions' and 'company'.

× And I follow the instructions according to 8 so that it can conveniently use an efficiently use the machine.

✓ And I follow the instructions carefully so that I can use the machine conveniently and efficiently.

The phrase 'according to 8' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct adverb placement. 'Conveniently use an efficiently use' is corrected to 'use the machine conveniently and efficiently'.

× In my perspective you I think it is important to read the instructions becaused using the machine without knowing the instructions and making it complicated to ourself.

✓ In my perspective, I think it is important to read the instructions because using the machine without knowing the instructions makes it complicated for ourselves.

The phrase 'you I think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'. 'Becaused' is a typo for 'because'. 'Making it complicated to ourself' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it complicated for ourselves'.

× Rather than reading the instructions and using the machine more efficiently is good for us.

✓ Reading the instructions and using the machine more efficiently is good for us.

The original sentence structure is incorrect. The corrected sentence removes 'Rather than' to form a proper subject and predicate structure.

× So I think reading instruction is very important.

✓ So I think reading instructions is very important.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the guidelines provided for using a machine.