机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to express your ideas clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: My favorite machine at home is the mixer. It helps me prepare different foods quickly, such as making dough and juice. I like it because it saves time and effort in the kitchen.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect word choices and unclear sentences. Focus on using simple and correct vocabulary to express your opinion clearly. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life. They help especially mothers to finish housework faster and easier. Therefore, these machines save time and reduce physical effort.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use simple sentences and correct grammar. Explain your reason logically with linking words.

示例: No, I usually do not read the instructions before using a machine because I already know how to use it. However, sometimes I read instructions if the machine is new or complicated.

建议: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to explain your opinion clearly. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because some machines are difficult to use. If we do not follow instructions, the machine might break. Therefore, reading instructions helps us use machines properly and avoid damage.

× Well, my favorite missing in my home is a mixer because in mixer we put altogether Anna makes.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is a mixer because in the mixer we put all the ingredients together.

The word 'missing' is a mispronunciation or incorrect use of 'machine'. Also, 'Anna makes' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error. The pronoun and noun usage is incorrect here, so it is corrected to 'machine' and a clearer phrase is used.

× An make a fools and make a muscle.

✓ It makes food and makes a smoothie.

The sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words 'fools' and 'muscle' which seem to be misheard or misused. Correct pronouns and nouns are used to clarify the meaning.

× A Anna make some juice.

✓ It also makes some juice.

The pronoun 'A Anna' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'It' referring to the mixer. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× So that's why missing is my favorite.

✓ So that's why the mixer is my favorite.

Again, 'missing' is incorrect and should be 'mixer'. The definite article 'the' is added for correctness.

× Ah yes this both are imputing for a daily life especially our mother because models doing everyday in housework so far.

✓ Ah yes, both of these are important for daily life, especially for our mother because she does housework every day.

The pronouns and nouns are incorrect: 'this both' should be 'both of these', 'imputing' is a mispronunciation of 'important', 'models' should be 'mothers', and the verb tense is corrected.

× Is it a team and was he missing answering?

✓ Is it a team and was he missing answering? (Sentence unclear and cannot be corrected without context)

This sentence is unclear and does not form a proper structure. It is likely a mishearing or transcription error. No correction possible without further context.

× Missing is imputing further life with a millibar.

✓ Machines are important for daily life with a millibar. (Assuming 'millibar' is incorrect, possibly 'mixer')

'Missing' should be 'machines', 'imputing' should be 'important'. The word 'millibar' is likely incorrect or misheard. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and noun use.

× No, not at all. I'm not onely instruction followed every worry.

✓ No, not at all. I don't only follow instructions every time.

The pronouns and verb forms are incorrect: 'I'm not onely instruction followed every worry' is unclear and corrected to proper pronoun and verb usage.

× Don't rent instruction before may sane because we know.

✓ I don't read instructions before using because we already know.

The phrase 'Don't rent instruction before may sane' is incorrect and unclear. Correct pronouns and verbs are used to clarify the meaning.

× Already about how to fix SO. We don't rate instruction.

✓ We already know how to use it. We don't read instructions.

The pronouns and verbs are incorrect: 'fix SO' is unclear, 'rate instruction' should be 'read instructions'. Corrected for clarity.

× Yes, it is important to realize the instruction because some of them are missing to join hardly that's why I'm missing will broke.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions because some machines are hard to use, and that's why machines can break.

The pronouns and verbs are incorrect: 'realize the instruction' should be 'read the instructions', 'missing to join hardly' is unclear and corrected to 'machines are hard to use', 'I'm missing will broke' corrected to 'machines can break'.

× So we will read an instruction an we fix a missing.

✓ So we will read the instructions and fix the machine.

The pronouns and articles are incorrect: 'an instruction' should be 'the instructions', 'fix a missing' should be 'fix the machine'.