机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に「mountain」と言っているのは「machine」の誤りと思われます。文を簡潔にし、文法を正しく使い、具体的な理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean a lot of clothes every day. For example, since we have two children, there are many clothes to wash, so this machine is very useful.

建议: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文が途中で切れていたり、語彙が不完全です。文を最後まで話し、接続詞を使って論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

示例: Absolutely yes. We have two small children, aged six and four, so our house is always messy. For example, there are many toys and clothes on the floor, so both sweeping machines and washing machines are very important to keep the house clean.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくいです。簡潔で正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because it takes time. After using the machine a few times, it becomes easier to understand how to use it.

建议: 文が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由をはっきり述べ、文を論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

示例: I don't think it is very important to read the instructions because using machines is not very difficult. If I have a problem, I usually check the Internet or contact the support center for help.

× My favorite mountain in my home is was amazing.

✓ My favorite machine in my home was amazing.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is was' which is a tense inconsistency. Also, 'mountain' is a wrong word here; it should be 'machine' to fit the context. The past tense 'was' is appropriate if referring to a past experience.

× Because it's useful to wash all the clothes I have.

✓ Because it's useful for washing all the clothes I have.

The phrase 'useful to wash' is less natural than 'useful for washing'. The plural 'clothes' is correct here.

× For example, we have two kids, so lots of calls.

✓ For example, we have two kids, so lots of clothes.

The word 'calls' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'clothes' to make sense in context.

× How to be washed every day?

✓ They need to be washed every day.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It needs a subject and verb to form a correct sentence.

× So favorite machine is washing machine.

✓ So my favorite machine is the washing machine.

Missing possessive pronoun 'my' and definite article 'the' before 'washing machine'.

× We have two kids, small kids, six and four years old, so our house is always messy.

✓ We have two small kids, six and four years old, so our house is always messy.

The phrase 'two kids, small kids' is redundant; 'two small kids' is more natural.

× For example, loads of toys and clothes on the.

✓ For example, loads of toys and clothes are on the floor.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the verb and object; it needs 'are on the floor' to be complete.

× On the floor so sweeping machines and washing machines are so impo.

✓ On the floor, so sweeping machines and washing machines are very important.

The word 'impo' is incomplete; it should be 'important'. Also, a comma is needed after 'floor'.

× Let's say no, I don't usually read though instruction because it's a little bit time consuming.

✓ Let's say no, I don't usually read the instructions because it's a little bit time-consuming.

'Though' should be 'the', and 'instructions' should be plural. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'.

× After starting using the machine it come get it, it will get it get easier and easier.

✓ After starting to use the machine, it becomes easier and easier.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs to be simplified and corrected for clarity.

× So I don't very readings.

✓ So I don't do much reading.

'Don't very readings' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'don't do much reading'.

× I don't think it's important to read instructions on using the machines or not really is not very difficult.

✓ I don't think it's important to read instructions on using the machines because it's not very difficult.

The sentence is awkward and missing conjunctions; 'because' clarifies the reason.

× Right now we consult and the Internet if there is a problem and.

✓ Right now, we consult the Internet if there is a problem.

The sentence is incomplete and has an extra 'and' at the end; it needs to be corrected for completeness.

× Of course, the support center is rich right now.

✓ Of course, the support center is helpful right now.

The word 'rich' is incorrect in this context; 'helpful' or 'available' fits better.