机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to give a direct topic sentence followed by specific reasons using linking words.

示例: My favourite machine at home is my coffee machine because I am addicted to coffee. Every morning, I use it to make fresh coffee quickly, which helps me start my day energetically.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how these machines help.

示例: Yes, I definitely think washing machines are very important because they reduce our workload. For example, they save time and effort by washing clothes automatically, so we don't have to do it manually.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and avoid repeated words.

示例: Yes, it depends on the machine. If I have used it before, I usually don't read the instructions. However, if the machine is new to me, I always read the manual carefully before using it.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammar errors and unclear expressions. Use linking words and clearer explanations to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because if we don't understand how to operate the machine properly, it may not work well or could get damaged.

× One of my favorite machine is my coffee machine.

✓ One of my favorite machines is my coffee machine.

The phrase 'one of my favorite' requires the noun following it to be plural because it refers to one item among many. Therefore, 'machine' should be 'machines'. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

× It take it, take it, take my.

✓ It takes it, takes it, takes my.

The verb 'take' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. Therefore, it should be 'takes' instead of 'take'. This is a third person singular verb agreement error.

× Yes, I definitely think washing machine is very necessary for our daily life.

✓ Yes, I definitely think washing machines are very necessary for our daily life.

When referring to washing machines in general, the plural form 'washing machines' should be used. Also, the verb should agree with the plural subject, so 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a singular and plural issue combined with subject-verb agreement.

× we don't need to manually it washed our clothes.

✓ we don't need to manually wash our clothes.

After 'need to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the past participle 'washed'. Also, 'manually' should be placed before the verb 'wash'. This is an incorrect use of verb form and adverb placement.

× If the machine was are used in earlier, before, early, early, then I don't, then I don't read the manual.

✓ If the machine was used earlier, then I don't read the manual.

The phrase 'was are used' is incorrect; it should be 'was used' to indicate past tense. Also, redundant words like 'before, early, early' should be removed for clarity. This is a past tense usage error and sentence structure issue.

× But if the machine is new for me, first I try to read the whole instruction and then I start using it, it will be.

✓ But if the machine is new to me, first I try to read the whole instruction and then I start using it.

The phrase 'new for me' should be 'new to me'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'it will be' which is incomplete and unnecessary. This is an incorrect use of preposition and sentence structure error.

× Yes, I definitely think it is very important to read a manual instruction becaused if we don't know how to start the machine and how the work actually work, the machine will not produce and not do their work properly.

✓ Yes, I definitely think it is very important to read the manual instructions because if we don't know how to start the machine and how it actually works, the machine will not function properly.

The phrase 'a manual instruction' should be 'the manual instructions' because it refers to specific instructions. 'Becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'How the work actually work' is incorrect; it should be 'how it actually works'. Also, 'the machine will not produce and not do their work properly' is awkward; 'the machine will not function properly' is better. This involves article errors, verb agreement, and sentence structure issues.