机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免断断续续的表达，并且使用更准确的词汇。可以尝试用连贯的句子表达观点，并且提供具体的细节支持。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the television because it allows me to spend quality time with my family. We often watch news or our favourite movies together, which is both entertaining and informative.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整的句子，并且明确表达观点。避免使用不相关或模糊的词汇，增加具体的理由和例子来支持观点。

示例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. Moreover, they help reduce exposure to harmful chemicals that might be used in manual cleaning.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用完整且连贯的句子，清楚表达自己的习惯和理由。避免使用错误的代词和拼写错误。

示例: No, I usually don't read the instructions. Instead, I search for tutorials or guides on the Internet because I find them easier and faster to understand.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的句子结构，避免口语化错误，清楚表达观点并提供理由。

示例: I think it's not always necessary to read instructions because many people can quickly learn how to use machines, especially if they have some previous experience.

× Well, my favorite machine is the television 'cause it can provide. A chance for me to spend quality time with my family.

✓ Well, my favorite machine is the television because it can provide a chance for me to spend quality time with my family.

原句中“'cause it can provide.”和“A chance for me to spend quality time with my family.”是两个不完整的句子，应该合并成一个完整的句子。建议将两句合并，去掉句号，使句子完整通顺。

× You can say different news on the television or your favorite movie.

✓ You can watch different news on the television or your favorite movie.

“say different news”用法错误，新闻是观看或收听的，不能用“say”。应使用“watch”表示观看电视内容。

× Because it can. Improve the efficiency and avoid people being exposed to the chemistry.

✓ Because they can improve the efficiency and avoid people being exposed to chemicals.

主语是复数“they”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“can improve”。另外，“the chemistry”用词不当，应改为复数“chemicals”。

× Which is. You know, maybe a hard people skiing.

✓ You know, maybe it's hard for people to do the cleaning.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。应重组句子，使其表达清晰，意思是“你知道，可能对人们来说做清洁很难”。

× No, I never use the instructions when I use a machine.

✓ No, I never use the instructions when I use a machine.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I will locate on the Internet.

✓ I will look it up on the Internet.

“locate”用法错误，应该用“look up”表示查找信息，且需要宾语“it”。

× And I think he is faster than looking in the directions.

✓ And I think it is faster than looking at the directions.

“he”指代不明，应改为“it”指代查找信息的方式；“looking in the directions”应改为“looking at the directions”。

× I draws follow the steps on the Internet.

✓ I just follow the steps on the Internet.

“I draws”语法错误，应改为“I just follow”，使句子通顺。

× Well, I sing. It's not essential to read instruction.

✓ Well, I think it's not essential to read instructions.

“I sing”应为“I think”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。

× 'Cause nowadays people can understand how to control our user machine very quickly.

✓ Because nowadays people can understand how to use machines very quickly.

“control our user machine”表达不当，应改为“use machines”。

× Are they may have some relative experience so there is no need to using the in.

✓ They may have some related experience, so there is no need to use the instructions.

“Are they may”语法错误，应为“They may”；“relative experience”应为“related experience”；“no need to using the in”应为“no need to use the instructions”。