机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about why you like the blender.

示例: My favourite machine at home is the blender, which my wife gifted me. I often use it to make delicious banana, mango, and strawberry shakes. It's very efficient and easy to clean, making it the best blender I've ever owned.

建议: Improve your answer by correcting vocabulary errors (e.g., 'sweeping machines' instead of 'swimming machines'), using linking words, and providing more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in daily life because they save time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly and efficiently, while sweeping machines help keep the house tidy, which benefits my whole family.

建议: Focus on clarity and coherence by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain why reading instructions is important with specific details and avoid fragmented sentences.

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it properly. This way, I can use all its functions effectively and ensure the machine performs well and lasts longer.

建议: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words to make your points clear and logical. Provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

示例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps us understand how to operate the machine correctly and use its various functions. This knowledge ensures the machine works efficiently and lasts longer.

× That is the best blender I ever.

✓ That is the best blender I have ever had.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense, which is necessary to express an experience up to now. Also, 'had' is needed as the past participle of 'have'. This correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× washing machines helps us to wash clothes really well, saves the time and save the energy.

✓ washing machines help us to wash clothes really well, save time and save energy.

The subject 'washing machines' is plural, so the verbs should be in plural form without 's'. Also, 'the time' and 'the energy' are uncountable in this context and do not need 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× And sweeping machines clean the house and help my family.

✓ And sweeping machines clean the house and help my family.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× By instructions machines machine can be. Run properly and we can see all different kind of functions and use them on use them with the good performance.

✓ By following the instructions, the machine can run properly, and we can see all different kinds of functions and use them with good performance.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'following' clarifies the meaning. 'Machines machine' is redundant; 'the machine' is correct. 'Kinds' should be plural to match 'all different kinds'. 'On use them' is incorrect and removed. 'With good performance' is the correct phrase.

× These functions. Help out machine.

✓ These functions help our machine.

The sentence is fragmented and has a typo: 'out' should be 'our'. Also, the period after 'functions' is incorrect; the sentence should be continuous.

× Becaused by instructions we can know and understand how to run the machine.

✓ Because of the instructions, we can know and understand how to run the machine.

'Becaused by' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'Because of' to indicate the reason. Adding a comma after the introductory phrase improves readability.

× And no different functions of their machine by reading the instructions.

✓ And learn about the different functions of the machine by reading the instructions.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'learn about' clarifies the meaning. 'Their' is replaced with 'the' to maintain consistency.

× This instructions. Helps the machine to run for a long time and we can do other.

✓ These instructions help the machine to run for a long time, and we can do other things.

'This instructions' is incorrect; 'instructions' is plural, so 'these' is correct. The period after 'instructions' should be a comma. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject. 'Do other' is incomplete; adding 'things' completes the thought.